Finally using the rumble fruit correctly lol he should embarrass every single pirate in the east blue and since he has haki he will beat crocodile but it will be difficult since his fight is in the desert so he has home field advantage so to speak

Again nerfing the lighting logia lol does this author know how strong it is? Making him look like a beta

Nerfing a logia what a trash novel

What’s the point? He literally can take them out so why drag out the original plot? Trash

I really like this story I hope you make more chapters of it.

Lighting is 17 times hotter than the outer layer of the sun. No one could survive even a lightning fist. Or Lightning strike basically El Thor

Look I'm only on chapter 2 but I'm posting this review now and Hope that you will update this story soon if you are alive there are not too many Marine Luffy stories and this with him having a logia you are just asking me to read so please if you are still alive and still into the story update worst case scenario rewrite but please continue with your story Marine Luffy plus logia Luffy is gold

Alright this is stupid/idiotic/moronic. Have you even read your own story at all? Or you just type and post it without nary a care whatever shit you write? Helmeppo the idiot turned into godlike being with the power of omnipresence. Luffy punch him to the wall, luffy go to marine base in high speed, and look there's helmeppo in high spirits bullying little girl and not to forget the little girl is omnipresent too.

you need to write more this story was a good story

you need to write more of these store

Man What were you drinking when writing the story. Marine going alone with a ship than gathering a crew. And that pairing luffy x hancock can never happen. He works for marine and as such for tenryubito.

This... this is ENTIRELY CANON! What the fuck were you thinking uploading this shit?! I watched One Piece, myself. Why would I reread a shitty fanfic version of it with minimal differences? Gah, this truly sickens me.

Zoro got promoted again despite not being a proper marine. Woah.

Oh, let's see this new development from this inept author. Canon Luffy took down Krieg at a similar rate that this Luffy did. Let's compare the difference: Canon Luffy is a paramecia that's only crazy strong. This Luffy is a Logia with Rokushiki, AND HAKI! This guy is so strong, yet he can't humiliate his opponents because the author doesn't understand the meaning of consequence of the character's actions.

Terrible, again.

THE GOING MERRY?! THE GOING MERRY?! THAT ISN'T A MARINE VESSEL! THAT IS NOOOOT A MARINE VESSEL!

This shit isn't Marine!Luffy. This would better have been a Schichibukai Luffy because he doesn't act like a fucking marine even a little. This story is a fucking lie. Jesus christ.

This took too long. Refer to my last review. Author, shape up. You can't keep relying on old shit for a good story.