A promising tale
Science mad and derring-do
Forgotten too fast

Oooh! This is so much fun!

Love love love seeing more stuff for Dishonored. Absolutely one of my favorite games. Also, excellent story with strong characters and solid prose. I'm sorry that you're not going to be updating, but I totally understand. You have my prayers for more good days than bad.

Please don't say this is abandoned! Update!

By the Outsider this is amazing. I can't wait for the next chapter! 3

I don't even know how many times I have re-read this. 6th time? 7th? At minimum 6.

you can't stop me hahaha

crying emily here

I'm back again to read it.

Hahaha

Eh, the outsider wasn't that bad in low chaos.

Not sure if I like your portray of the Outsider on this fanfic. Hmm.

Well hello! So good to see another piece. Will there be more soon? ;)

Great chapter. And awesome little scene at the end with The Outsider. You keep up the quality, very nicely done.

A few things:

Firstly, you don't seem to quite establish that there is a guard in the room before Samuel shouts at him. You might want to drop just a single line about the guard, maybe him being surprised by Samuel smashing the music box.

"Cecelia was up before Piero was, and they set off at a jog even as the guard ran on to find Sokolov." A "jog" doesn't sound quite urgent enough. A jog in my head at least is pretty slow. I suggest "sprint" or something like it.

"His head was thrown back, jaw tight in what could only be described as something like agony." Odd sentence and particularly the "something like" seems unnecessary. I suggest something like the simpler "jaw tight in an agonized grimace."

" At least it had stopped flowing quite so easily," I suggest replacing "it" with "the blood" as you at this point haven't mentioned "blood" as what "it" could refer to.

Good chapter, looking forward to more. Happy writing.

Hmmm. Can anyone say "mindscrew"? I wonder if Jessamine was ever there in the first place. And what on earth is The Outsider after!?

Hi! I just want to say I love your fic. The way you depict Corvo, and how he dealt with Daud. Also how you depict Piero :). I love the relationship you created between Emily and Corvo and Corvo's relationship with Jessamine. I do hope you continue this story, it has great promise. :) Look forward to more of your great writing PlaidButterfly!

Awesome please continue.

Yay new chapter.

Wow, this was, beautiful. And probably the most tasteful sex-scene I've ever seen on . Only thing I'm dissatisfied is that it's quite short, so I have to wait for the next chapter.

I really think you probably write the best Dishonored I've seen. Of course there aren't a lot at all and even fewer good ones, but yours is really well-written and catch the tone well, even if it is slightly happier, which it has to be considering we are dealing with the aftermath of the low chaos ending.

Good job, please don't make me wait as long for the next chapter.

This was such a bitter-sweet chapter, definitely worth the wait. It was interesting to make use of the Void as a setting, though I'm sure Corvo must've liked the change of pace.
Hope you keep up the awesome writing!