You change the tense frequently from past to present, but other than that, great fic!

aw, what an...interesting...way to get over a bad dream. lol.

YAY! YOU WROTE A FIC! And...whoo...*flaps self* After that, Sherlock had better get some rest; he must be, ahem, tired by then ;) :DDD

You should write more one-shots and maybe try to do a story? Your choice. Loved this and please write again soon. You are an excellent author.
Minerva