PLEASE! more more more more more

OMG NOOOOOOO! This story is soooooo freaking goood! I know it’s been ages but if you ever read this PLEASE I BEG OF YOU PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY! It is such an amazing story and deserves to have an amazing end! Thanks so much for writing it as well!

O. M.G! are you serious? right after the wedding? Please I beg you to update this story. I know I have no right with all the stories I have left on the cusp. I know how RL has a way of interrupting our writing. I loved this story. And I will keep it on alert for when you feel. its fitting an ending.

Yeah, your Bella is a little coo-coo!

WTF!? She can't sit her dumb ass down on the toilet to keep from falling over?

if they know jasper is on the train ahead of them why don't they run and catch up?

edward needs that stick shoved so far up his ass it comes out his ears!

i'm sorry too. your beta is having more than computer issues. she can't spell, punctuate or use the correct word in a sentence. this is a very, very good story but it's very hard to read with all the spelling, missing punctuation and grammatical errors.

edward is such a child! he's just to used to having everything his own way and blackmailing everyone to do what he wants.

i thought thought jasper was twenty years old not seventeen?

edward always is such a nosy bastard. he's probably stalking bella and heard jasper's thoughts.

rose fell down in the hallway? she'll never get over that.

I really like the story I definitely didn't think we were going to leave it on a cliffhanger

What a place to stop writing. Would love to read more. Hope you find your way baa k to completing this one.

I would basically proclaim my love for a dude that gave me first edition of my favorite books.