| Reviews for Finding You Again |
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Rocio chapter 1 . 3/3 Nice! Loved first chapter |
Avivagreene chapter 15 . 12/1/2017 Loved this story! |
LoveHOOKed chapter 15 . 7/25/2015 Please update soon! |
Pest chapter 15 . 6/25/2015 Update! Update! Update! I'm waiting here! |
Guest chapter 15 . 6/21/2015 Aaaaand cliff hanger...FML! |
CS FAN chapter 11 . 12/28/2014 WHA!? BUT!? WHY!? |
SAY WHA chapter 10 . 12/28/2014 Bet this was before season 3... Killian nearly killed Blackbeard |
Lemonz chapter 9 . 12/28/2014 SEXY! 3 3 |
anoymous chapter 2 . 12/28/2014 I liked the part when Hook said: "You dropped this when you were madly kissing me" 3 |
NaturalMyth74 chapter 15 . 10/19/2014 Great story! The storyline is compelling and well thought out though I am struggling to determine the purpose of some of the scattered flashbacks, especially the one with Ariel. It makes Hook seem i genuine about his feelings for emma since he seems to fall so easily making him have two past loves rather than one. And given that Ariel isn't dead I'm curious as to know why he isn't trying to find Ariel now rather than obtain his revenge from Rumplestiltskin. But I do agree with the previous comment that some terminology is overused and the romance seems to be a bit rushed. Every time the two encounter each other emma and hook seem unable to control their libido. Therefore, that seems to be the basis of their relationship rather than feeling. Hook constantly risks his life for emma but is unable to give up his quest for revenge. And your constant mention of women being a conquest seems to make emma one of hooks conquests as well. Even if he does love her, he seems to be ambivalent in nature. Regardless, it is a very well written story, though I would like to see more consistency in the characters' decisions. Please finish your fanfiction... I am just on the edge of my seat waiting to know how it will end |
Glori chapter 15 . 7/21/2014 More! |
Guest chapter 15 . 7/5/2014 It is good, but a little too, how do you put it? rushed? The chemistry between the two had no time to build into a strong friendship honestly before all the romantic scenes occurred. And what the crap is up with Ariel at the end. Hook is a bloody player. And some phrases such as "claimed her lips in a greedy kiss" were overused. Just use some more synonyms. And other than that, I like the plot, but I would desperately like a big surprise to occur to add some spice to the story. Thanks for reading! |
Bonnie chapter 15 . 3/18/2014 NO! U can't end this here. I hope u have chapters for this story. |
bfggfdr chapter 15 . 3/12/2014 AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I LOVE IT CAPTAIN HOOK FOR THE WIN #KEEP CALM AND KISS A PIRATE#snowing#outlawqueen#captain swan#Charmattack#rumbelle # wicked always wins |
somewhatdelirious chapter 15 . 10/21/2013 Oooooh fun ;);) |