I see that you said nothing was abandoned a few years back. Is it still the case for this one? This is really excellent stuff.

nope, your tenten is a fucking moron. she has scrolls with BACKUP CLOTHES! but she instead washes her current clothes and sits around naked, and somehow it's naruto's fault? Dumb bitch.

Weak naruto

Lol this was a great start. I liked the scene with the fireball. The burning of her clothes was unexpected and all the more rewarding because of it.

One thing, though, you really set up that scene in advance and you weren't exactly 'subtle' about it, so when you started including details about the ruins in that paragraph it just felt like a departure from what we were all waiting for. I guess what I'm saying is that I don't think you should ramp up the reader for a scene like that and still expect them to care about/pay attention to any side information you slip in.

That's just my opinion, though.

Also, yeah, Tenten's ass is just

I'm confused. Naruto thinks TenTen never lost her temper at him? Has he forgotten that she fired a huge fireball at him because he accidently saw her naked? And then angrily blamed *him* when her weapon scrolls and clothing went up in flames from the fireball SHE made?
I know Naruto is the forgiving sort, but he seems to have a case of amnesia here.

Shouldn't we still be getting lemony stuff regarding Naruto and Shion that you promised? I think that holds a bit more importance than whatever will or won't happen with Kazehana.

Anyways, pity that Shion didn't stay aware of what happened long enough to see Naruto refuse Kazehana. Also, I really like how Naruto, despite just last chapter bemoaning how much he really really wanted it, refused to have sex because he didn't feel enough of a relationship there.

Why is he failing at the leaf-cutting exercise?
He finished that step back in Oni no Kuni.

It shows the death of someone who dies protecting her, right?
Would she be in Konoha at the time (and thus not far from being wiped away if Pein isn't stopped), or would the consequence of him _not_ being stabbed in the heart eventually result in her death?

"That was unfortunate, because it was during training, when both he and Kakashi were strangely worn out, that the enemy chose to make their first move."

So... Miroku wound of screwing around with their mission by screwing around with Kakashi?

Aww, Naruto's a daddy!

I will be so so so so SO disappointed in you if that eyeball fungus doesn't return at some time.

Hinata over reacting for how he doesn't like her. she needs to grow up and get over it, she has hero worship, not love. I do think the girls went over board with his peeping, but I've thought that about a few pranks so far.

everyone so mean to him, even when it's not his fault. kinda harsh.

I've read three chapters and I just don't get where this story is going. The Uzu ruins had a boat load of potential in your story. Thank you for allowing us all to read your stories. Have a blessed day.

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I would love it if you were to finish this story. I realize you've left it for over a year, but I love your way of handling all the characters and the dialogue, and of course the romantic drama. Too many great fics die early on this site, so I hope you get the notion to come back to it