So sad but GOOD!

WHEN I ASKED FOR A HAPPY ENDINGS UPDATE THIS IS NOT WHAT I MEANT! THIS IS SAAAAAAAAAAD :''''''''(
But beautiful! Great story :')

I love reading this one shot! Great work!

sad and sweet at the same time :)

was doing OK reading this story until I read the last three lines, Tony died and was back with his beloved Ziva both watching there children so proud of them Tony called Ziva by his pet name Sweet Cheeks. good story.

Awww, sob, sob. So said but brilliant! :'( Jx

:( That was heartbreaking to read. Will you do one about Ziva's death? I can't imagine how Tony would've dealt with that considering in this series he's been so apprehensive about losing her during her pregnancies and in her work.

Thanks for sharing. :)

touching. but a few names I can not make out from where they are comming? maybe I should read it again. NIcely written though

so sad

This is so depressing! I knew it would be sad, but not THIS sad. Nice comedic relief at the end though!