How, in the name of every god known to our miserable species, does this not have MORE REVIEWS?! It doesn't make any sense! Its always the best written stories that are often over-looked, but I'm glad (once more) that I stumbled upon your work.

Oddly enough, I had JUST noticed this oneshot a little later than I should have. The Hell is the matter with me?

Anywho, as always, I enjoyed the seamless transitions between events and prospective; always weaving sentences together in order to catch the eye and play with the mind. Well done, my good sir. Well done.

Craine...

an absolutely amazing story. I loved every word of it.

Y- you get COMMISSIONED? As in PAID TO DO THIS? LUCKY! How do you even go about that?

So, this was... This was a good piece. You did well with all three characters, and with the moods, too. A sadfic with a happy ending. Haven't seen one of these since... Since I wrote "Something to Live For". Scratch that, for about an hour, since Samadhir just finished off "One Leg to Stand On". Of course, the endings to our fics were a bit closer to bittersweet than truly happy, but whatever.

This was a beautifully written story, you know, it really was. I never thought Applejack would be one for polygamy, but, eh, what do I know?

See you soon!

i am impressed. I was lostenimg to galaxy in janaki by flying lotus while reading this.
I suggest you record this as an audio book with said song in background.
The song and your natrual writing voice go so well together.