Bravo

So much for 7 years of extra training lmao.
i get that you're trying to make naruto less op but the least you could do was make those 7 years worth a shit. if i see anymore desperate clinging to canon bullshit i'm dropping this story

Why did you skip 7 years if you're going to make naruto so helpless against a bunch of genin? I mean really chakra exaustion after a couple of seconds of using kyuubi's chakra?
i'm glad that you're trying to make an effort to diverge from canon but why keep kabuto alive when naruto was seriously considering murdering garaas siblings for a scroll?

Good job rapping as bee

Shouldn't naruto be fourteen here. I missed a bit on the ages a but I remember naruto telling Tayuya about the nine tails attacking seven years ago. In this chapter you said seven years had fine by. So, Naruto should be roughly fourteen. I find his naivete about the opposite sex to be ridiculous, especially since he's reading those books. And is Tayuya only just now starting to develop? She's a bit of a late bloomer huh?

sure, his thought of genjutsu being useless will be thrown out the window the moment he met tayuya

Subarashi

Naruto wants a better lifeNaruto goes to Suna

Ooh boy. Is he in for the shock of his life when he finds out just what Suna thinks about Jinchūriki.

good story :)

this one lost me on girl kyuubi

This was a great story and I really enjoyed it definitely different from the other ones that I've read.

Im loving this fic!
I hope that Tayuya has her flute in the near future!

This has one of the best endings I've read in a long time... Damn good job on this fic...

Why is he seven and a half when he just had his birthday?

Great bloody story! Absolutely love it!