| Reviews for When Love Came Down |
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DiamondBackNeko-chi chapter 1 . 11/19/2017 nice |
Angel chapter 1 . 7/1/2016 It was really good, but I think you're rushing it a bit. For the first chapter it was kind of fast. Overall really good though |
Emma Simpson chapter 1 . 2/27/2016 That was adorable! Thank you Jay, you just made my day! (Sorry, I just realized that rhymed...) |
minori nao chapter 1 . 1/17/2016 That was sooo cute! XD |
HinataKaede chapter 1 . 11/2/2015 This is a really cute story! I liked it a lot. Good job! |
faisyah865 chapter 1 . 1/14/2015 *dies then comes back as a ghost to haunt you for all the times you killed me with your fluff* |
Valledorthedragon chapter 1 . 11/22/2014 This was really good! The perfect balance of lovey (to satisfy the hardcore shippers) and fluffy (to satisfy those that don't like the bleugh stuff- myself included). Yeah I really really enjoyed this a really good little one shot ... In fact it's earned you a follower on to reading your next story ! Laters :-D |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/11/2014 Super sweet! Loved it! |
TV chapter 1 . 10/9/2014 It is a sweet story, and I like the way you write - your pacing is steady, making the story more endearing. However, I would like to point out a tiny thing you might improve: Vikings are pagans. They do not have Christmas, because the Viking period was before Christianization. I would suggest using the word "Yule", for a similar holiday that had been there even before Christianization. (In fact, in the Scandinavian languages, "Christmas" is actually "Jul", from which the word "Yule" is latinized and is pronounced exactly "Yule".) Still, I like this story a lot! 3 |
bloodlilly chapter 1 . 7/16/2014 Freaking awesome! |
Samantha chapter 1 . 5/31/2014 That was so cute! I am really glad I read this... I hope you write more Hijacks but this was perfect, you're really talented. Thanks for the story experience! I loved it! |
cassy1994 chapter 1 . 5/23/2014 that was super cute |
sierra.steinbrecher chapter 1 . 5/9/2014 You know, why not use the cannon Viking winter holiday Snoggletod? Same general effect. |
PureHearted3177 chapter 1 . 3/29/2014 I love it! Jack and Hiccup are such a cute couple together, even if they are both boys :) Neow :3 |
Yaoi Lover223 chapter 1 . 2/25/2014 OMG write fucking more. Ok? |