Sweet!

This fic reminds me of Hitoribocchi no Sadame (hope I spelled that right). Was that where you got some inspiration from?

That's sweet...

awe... it really made me cry...

I wanna bash Hibari-sama's father for doing that to him!

I liked this story x3 It had a nice ending

-Star1006918

greet story
but can you post the original version

i can see a tiny form of 1827 in this _

and Oh My God Fon is Hibari's half-brother O.o is that really true?

*sniff* wonderful *sniff* just wonderful

TT Tears are cascading down my face. I can't describe the feeling of wistfulness in my heart. This was awesomely done author-san. Hibari-san is hard to characterize and most authors make him OOC but he was sooo into character in your fanfic. Keep up the good work and I gotta say that you did a great job reasoning out Hibari-san's attitudes or rather, his bloodthirsty-ness (if that's even a word). Thanks for the fanfic

T.T Kyoya finally found a place to belong and I enjoyed the trip to the future and seeing as Tsuna of the future consoled to Gibari T.T was beautiful!

This is beautiful. Everyone has insecurites, and I think you've captired Hibari's perfectly. Wonderful job.
Stay amazing!

Great job! *thumbs up* The way you explained Hibari's relationships with his mother, father, and Fon built the foundation for him wanting a chance to have a family again. The ending was sweet, too- Hibari smiling and crying brought up a vivid image and visualization, as we all want to see him do that. Again, great job!