I really like this story and loved this chapter. The smut was steamy and hot! I liked how you addressed Puck's ethnicity in this. First look you don't think white. I liked the character of Sean. I think him and Puck would make good friends. I would love to see them on the basketball courts talking about girls and all that bro talk. I wuold love to see Mercedes with her new friends hanging out. Maybe you could do a chapter where Puck and Mercedes go back to Lima and see how much they changed especially after hanging around their group.

YESSSSSSSS! The last two chapters where giving me so much life. Its just not right how much I love it. I like that Cedes has spread her wings. Its great that you're touching on the whole interracial part of the relationship because like it or not, in real life it would be a factor. I honestly just hope that its not what the whole story will turn into. I'm sure there will be times where they have to deal with negative things but I hope its not all race based. I hope that they did with all kinds of ups and downs. It looks like neither Puck nor Cedes is the jealous type in this story but I'd like them to have one good fight about something...followed by smutty make up sex of course.

It would be cool for Puck to have more LA friends as well, even if that means bringing one of the NDs from Lima. I'm all for you bringing Santana into the picture. If the Sean person doesn't go anywhere it'd be cool to have a Santana/Puck bromance since they're so much alike. I know Naya talked about her moving to LA to become a Telenovela star...I'm all for that. Maybe hook her and one of Cedes friends up. Or Artie, I see Artie fitting in just fine with the crowd that Puckcedes hang around.

HOW YOU JUST GON END THE CHAPTER AS SOON AS WE GET TO MR. NASTY TIME? You know how long I been waiting for this? This chapter was good and I need that update like yesterday!

I say that you could hook Sean up with Ashley and have them go on double dates and the have Santana or Unique come and visit on holidays. Picture Cedes, Satan, and Unique together like shopping or something. I can see Satan and Unique talking Cedes into buying sexy lingerie.

Oh no, you were hit with a case of writer's block? That shit can be so mean, but I am glad you pulled out of it.

As for the chapter I loved it. Loved how Mercedes and Pucks "friendship" grew and got deeper as it progressed. Loved how her brothers were confronting Puck about it and Mercedes being the Seductress she is.

Also Puck thinking about his Puckcedes children was so damn cute I sat here and let out a loud Awww.

Mercedes and Puck got together at last and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Perferct! I loved every word written in this chapter. I like shy and unsure Puck, how he eased into Mercedes' personal life was so effortless yet masterminded all at the same time. Oh, and her feeling him the same way he was feeling her and had to use her brothers to get the deets was just cute. Perfect cliffhanger btw! I'm so hyped for the next two chapters.

Let us pray. *bows head* Lord, thank you for the blessing that is this story. Thank you for making Puck see the errors of his ways and for making him maketo the necessary changes. Lord, thank you for getting us through the trying times that was season 4. The devil was busy that entire season but you got us through it. Lord, we don't ask for much, just a little something here and there. Please allow for Kaybee to post this update soon. Lord bless her with the inspiration to complete this next chapter in a way that will elevate the life that you've given me. And Lord, most importantly, please make it so it doesn't take 3 months to come because you know my heart can't take it.
In your name I pray, Amen.

Wow KayBee 80 there is so much to take in in this chapter! I Love it! Puck coming to Sam man to man was great! The Samcedes disagreement. I get the feeling that Sam is falling for Britt cuz' she needs someone tt lean on or how Mercedes says it to be her world. Britt will depend on Sam! I kinda of picture Sam with a Superman complex and Britt will always be the damsel in distress! Puck helping Mercedes through the break up is so sweet and fun. Mercedes light way flirting is great.
Great update worth the wait! Can't read what's next with the Puckcedes!

I LOVE THIS! Can't wait for their date.

Can I just say I love this story!? There is just so much here that I can't take it! As much as I love Samcedes, I just want Mercedes to be happy... And Noah is a true gentleman cause Puck would have rode the Cedes train a long time ago! Can't wait to see Cedes reaction to Puck's feelings, and to see a jealous Sam!

I can't even update my own story cause I'm too enthralled in reading yours! Love it! Update soon!

Ugh oh, turning point. :-:

First of all, Puck is still hilarious with his quips and the different things he says: "from wherever the hell he came from" "gay swim team" "water ballet shit" "garglers" and everything else that's funny that comes out of his mouth. I have to say the two separate combos at the Hudmel home is what I would definitely would have liked to have seen on my tv. Also, love how you're including scenes from s2 about how Samcedes was from his POV. If you do look closely there were tiny signs about those two unless I'm grasping at straws but I don't think so. The cut scene. You included a line mentioning that scene. Much more than what we got on the show. Oh, also, that Sam and Mercedes kept kissing after that one kiss we so at the end of Human Nature. And that it got taped. Man, I wished we could have seen all of this on tv. And from Puck's pov and feelings. He's the best person to show that. Loved the conversation between Puck and Mercedes. She needed that.

Such an awesome story. :)

OMG can we talk about the greatness I just read?! You did something that the Glee writers could never do and that's make sense of the fuckery that was SamCedes. Everything matches up so well. I can't wait to see how things play how. #TeamPuckCedes I love that its all from Pucks pov as well.

I like SamCedes but I'm ALL about Cedes branching out. I hope you do an ArtCedes or MikeCedes smut filled story. Even if they are one shots. You just...you just write her so well.

I really like you doing Puck. It's how I hear him & it's awesome! I was so pissed at Sam & I felt like fighting. She tried her best to keep calm but I fly off the handle at the slightish hint of the bull he was spittin. Liked the goodbye ** but he coulda let the girl enjoy her afterglow. I like that you have him stay in LA but I'm truly in love with their living situation. I don't care if he feels like an old married couple that ** is beautiful! I feel like Mama's throwing mad hints & he's letting them fly over his head. Correct that ** bro. Hopefully no one tries to sweep in cuz I'll cut a **! Also, Finn think he slick sleeping in her room. I see you Hudson!

I'm so late but I completely missed the memo about this update. I loved the way everything was laid out in Puck's perspective as usual. He's so intuitive. Notices so much including what's beneath the surface but says very little. This chapter also reminded me of why I loved season 3 Sam so much and I hate you for that because I'd moved past my feels and let it go. I'm super excited about moving past all this foreplay between these two and getting down to the nittu gritty. I'm bursting at the seams waiting for them to have some Mr. Nasty time. Great update as always.