I really like where this is going. Both plots are interesting in their own way. I'm interested to see more of the Slender and Rose plot, my main question will she be like a proxy as she ages? Or more like a daughter? A bit of both? And the detective. Will Slender have to dispose of him? How close will he get?
Hope to see more of this story, it's very intriguing.

pleeeezzzz update soon i must read more! *panting* *smiles like Jeff the killer* you WILL update, right? : ) just being silly

Really interesting concept. I hope you continue it. :)

Do not apologize for anything. I normally don't read fanfiction with other characters. This changes a lot. You did a very good job laying out the plot line, all the characters are acting as if they were real. This is beautiful. I don't care if it takes you a year to write the next chapter. Beautiful. Good job.

I don't mean to sound rude or amything. But actually, Slenderman has 3 brothers, Splendorman,
Trenderman,
and Sexual Offenderman

This is intense.

Ah such suspense! What even is happening?!

I hope the police don't mess with Slendy and Rose... D:

The love Slenderman has grown for Rose is just so beautiful, you're awesome! :'D

NO SLENDY YOU'RE AMAZING *sob*

Oh my god Roooosee! D': Thank goodness Slendy's there! :D

Oh my god Slendy yayyyy this jut gets sweeter and sweeter!

Aw that's so sweet I LOVE IT

I love the concept of a good Slenderman! I'm excited to read this story! :D

Please MOREEE!