Reviews for Cruel: Heart and Soul
corinne444 chapter 3 . 12/5/2012
Okay, this is only getting weirder. I'm done.
corinne444 chapter 2 . 12/5/2012
Okay, a few things.
1. Uh, this is disturbing.
2. Blaise Zabini is a male in the books...
3. Ginny's full name isn't Virginia.
4. This is just so wrong on so many levels...I guess I haven't read the whole thing yet, but I'm hoping Draco dies. This is all very pedophile-ish...
Bella Lund chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
I liked it very much! :)
Keladrion chapter 5 . 1/17/2010
Her name is Ginevre you know, way better than Verginia
Nhonami chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
The only thing that allowed me to continue reading this fanfic to its completion was the interesting storyline. If it were not for the storyline, I would not have made it through the second chapter.

The story is not only littered with spelling errors, there are a lot of errors in the story itself. Ginny's full name is not Virginia. You misspelled Malfoy, how on earth can you miss such a blatant typo? Do you not proof your own work? Other writers in this community use beta readers... why didn't you? This story can be so much more than it is if you would have simply taken the time to edit it properly. I do not really care if your other reviewers seem to think that your writing skill is beyond compare. If they truly did value your stories and your success as a writer, they would tell you the truth and not what you want to hear. The basis for the storyline was awesome, it just lacked in the execution. It would be nice to come back to this story one day in the future and find it without all the errors. I would be an avid reader if that were to happen.
Rok Chik 16 chapter 32 . 10/7/2006
I LUV IT, I LUV IT, I LUV IT! You're a brilliant writer, have u eva hought of actually writing an original and getting it published! i'd buy it!

KEEP WRITING... :)
Rok Chik 16 chapter 6 . 6/27/2006
This might be getting annoying ,so sorry but i cant help but tell u that ur an awesome writer. i dunno if u have thought of this but u should see if u can get sum of ur work published!

Im serious.
Rok Chik 16 chapter 4 . 6/27/2006
u r a freakin genius! :) :)

please, please keep on writing!

Luv Rok Chik 15
Rok Chik 16 chapter 1 . 6/26/2006
You've got to be an optimist. If you believe in it, it's impossible to fail.

You just proved that quote right, your a great writer and i cant wait to read more!
hibidibidiiy chapter 34 . 6/26/2006
well too be completely honest i wasn't too thrilled with your fic

you had a good story going for a while but then you threw in the whole soulmate stuff etc without introduction...not too mention you made quite a few grammer mistakes. but most off all your story lacked a peak...it was kinda flat throughout.

but it was a great idea for a story keep up the work
sandysalsa chapter 34 . 8/19/2005
I LOVE your fic, I just wanted you to know that.

I read this story a very long time ago, but I don't know if I was rude and didn't review or not, so now I am.

I am also sending you an email to join my forum for all other HP authors like you and me, and I hope to see you there!

A fan who adores this fic,

Amy! [HeirOfHufflepuff]
whatever dude chapter 34 . 2/5/2005
GAH I love your story! I am so psyched! it has a nice plot, and i almost always love D/G fics btw, most of my links are D/G fics, and I don't really write, but I LOVE reveiwing and now I actully can sign them *-* I LOVE IT! *-* I LOVE IT! *-* I LOVE IT! *-* I LOVE IT! *-* I LOVE IT! *-* I LOVE IT! *-* I LOVE IT! *-* I LOVE IT! *-* I LOVE IT! *-* I LOVE IT! *-* I LOVE IT! *-* I LOVE IT!
DaniMalfoy chapter 1 . 1/29/2005
I think this is the best g/d fanfic i have ever read, most dont have enough romance in them, or arent finished or arent long enough. I adore long stories and this is the best fanfic by far! Hopefully you will write some more Draco/Ginny fanfics as you are brilliant!
Lilybean chapter 4 . 12/17/2004
em...I didn't quite understand the whole "thinking of himself first" thing. I can see why you did it...but I don't understand how it works...worked. Er...I'll keeping reading now.
Aeris Lux chapter 1 . 10/18/2004
Hi my name is Paula (Pekena Malfoy) and I would like to translate its fic: Cruel: Heart and Soul for the Portuguese... you allow me? Please... the more soon possible Debtor answers me
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