| Reviews for Your First? |
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MikariStar chapter 1 . 8/25/2013 cute |
Lady Shadow92 chapter 1 . 8/25/2013 wow that was good |
purpledragon6 chapter 1 . 3/2/2013 Very sweet! |
Jess chapter 1 . 12/26/2012 Aww that's adorable! :) great story! :') |
LittleMissPanda84 chapter 1 . 12/11/2012 It took me five minutes to actually find the ability to type again, because I was just sitting here fangirling. It was so cute! "Sure, but you're my last. That's what counts." AWWWWWW! :D The feels! Love this. |
Genius-626 chapter 1 . 12/11/2012 Great concept, great problem, great resolution :D I love how dedicated Felix is to Calhoun, he loves her so much he'd let her go! |
keep-me-posted chapter 1 . 12/10/2012 Love, love, love, love! |
SephKid chapter 1 . 12/9/2012 Aw that's so cute. 3 Lovely writing! |
JimmyLane chapter 1 . 12/9/2012 That last sentence had me smiling so hard, it couldn't be more true:) |
misskeith chapter 1 . 12/8/2012 Aw. Adorable. Loved this |
FanFic Fabricator chapter 1 . 12/8/2012 Love this! 3 |
XXPay4XtraShippingsXX chapter 1 . 12/8/2012 BEAUTIFUL! |
CookiesxMilkEXCITEMe chapter 1 . 12/8/2012 Awww! -snif- That was beautiful. (:D And Tamora's sly for sneaking that in there. ;) The only constructive critism I give is "your" and "you're". Yes you use 'You're' a couple of times, but not enough. The story's great and well writen also. :) Love this. :D I wonder what's going t happen now that Brad's back and now living in their game... -Saya |