Reviews for In the Blink of an Eye |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know how I just found this story. As a Sam and Sam/Jules fan, this was truly great. Very well written, and it had that nice balance between action and drama. Thanks for writing it, and I can't wait for more stories from you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was the perfect ending for the story. The story was so full of action and anguish, that a calm debrief and locker room scene were needed to bring the reader down. Yes, do keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brillient job very much in character |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good story, well written |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! Flashpoint lives on thanks to authors like you - THANK YOU for that! Can't wait till your next story! Wishing you a Merry Christmas :D:D:D:D |
![]() ![]() You're kidding me the end I look forward 2 this story each day and now you're ending it! It was great while it lasted! Thank you for writing it and sticking with it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice ending I hope you do more sam and jules stories |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was nice, and you were right in the beginning when I said that I worry about the Sam/Jules pairing, you did it as much justice as it's done in the show but didn't overdo it, it was nice. Really liked this fic a lot, a good mix of angst and humor and like I've said throughout, very technical and precise. I wish it went on longer, would have liked to see more but then again maybe I'm just hoping I see more of your stories in the future. As long as you're not a stranger and you keep writing some Flashpoint fics, I think I can deal with it ending here. (And as long as you touch on Wordy again, you gave so many hints in this one but, I get it, this was Sam's show, just don't forget about him.) Thanks for this, the time and energy that goes into writing these is much appreciated and I can't wait to see more from you :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi there, You posted chapter 15 again. Have a nice day |
![]() ![]() Chapter 16 is the same as chapter 15 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are they ok? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chapter 15 and 16 are the same!? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Same chapter as 15? |
![]() ![]() Please continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry it's been such a gap since I reviewed, 12 hour work days will do that to me but I've been reading your story and so looking forward to your updates during my quick breaks. I feel like there's almost too much for me to say about everything from the last couple chapters but here's my run down: 1. Love the 'take down' scene (if you can call it a take down). Just everything that goes wrong, Spike getting bitten and hit in the head with dishes made me crack up, Wordy and Ed just being tossed aside, Sam being whacked with a whiskey (no, vodka) bottle, it was just a great scene until it escalated out of control and things got very serious very fast. 2. Love all the subtle little things about Wordy's strength and how Greg really does know things but isn't going to say right now, and how Spike just rallies them all, it was great. 3. Just loving how this is rounding out so far and can't wait to see the implications from this call between Sam and Jules, for Sam and the team, and for Sam emotionally (and I haven't forgotten about Wordy of course!) Thanks for these consistent updates and for these really great chapters, hopefully I'll be able to review more consistently again soon! |