Is that the offspring “rise, fall, rage and grace” picture?

There are only four elements - fire, water, air, earth. Or if you're referring to the periodic table,118. Darkness is simply the absence of light, it's not an element. Light comes from fire, it's not a separate element. Lightning also comes from a combination of air and fire so, not an element. You can't just make up extra elements that don't make any sense.

Two Dragon eggs, Great idea

Sehr spannend, starker Beginn - thrilled story

SO MUCH GREY!
I wonder if they have even painted their COCKS grey!

Dumbledore knew where harry was for the first eight years of his life so he couldn't have been looking for him

You lost me at the lightsabers...

Story had some good setting up, but then it started going off the rails pretty much as soon as Harry got to Hogwarts.

Snape?
Snape!
I know Rowling said Severus was good, a hero.

I disagree!

Just because two evil men fight each other does not make one of them good.
Severus Snape acted like an evil man, if he had been good he would have killed other death eaters. Way too many were let go free after Tom was killed the first time.
Good people don't treat abused children the way Snape did.

Snape can be redeemed, but only before he's marked.
It is done in ROUNDABOUT DESTINY.

Sorry you lost me here.
Not reading the rest.
Don't bother PMing me.

Why would the organization need help?

I think that unless they were betrayed from within they should be strong.

I'll keep reading.

Not happy with explicit scenes, but I'll read more hoping it gets better.

... what... the... fuck...? Yeah... married at 11... not fast at all. I wish all of us guys were that lucky to marry a beautiful girl that young. But no... we're not. He didn't even ask her to be his girlfriend. They just skipped everything and married.

He's showing his cards waaayyy too early. I have no idea what you're trying to accomplish but things are too blunt, short and fast. There is no tact. No exposition. No foreshadowing. No good plot. I'm sorry. I'm not really this mean but I hate it when people suck the juice out of a good story idea. The relationship started waaaayyy too early as well. The soul bond initiated from a kiss! Seriously?! How cliche are you trying to get? *shakes head sadly*

Too much, to soon, to be believed. I may come back to it later. ~~ Snake ~~

Wrist lasers? Really? Wtf man

Great story. I really liked it. But could you please update the Grey Army soon. I know it's unlikely that will happen because the last time you updated was a year ago but I just like this series. Thank you for writing this amazing story.