this was a good story to bad it has not been updated. only thing you need a beta reader

The cliff! D: Please update I am still waiting

Love how u added yukari in there lol and can you add a little chapter of how ther characters meet or something that would be funny :p also can u do ore plzzzzzzzzz thx

So, can you make Harry a void mage? Aside from being my favorite class (which Aisha isn't here) the thought of Harry mocking Voldy with dark magic (something he spent his life perfecting) is just too amusing. Anyway, awesome story. Your grammer is improving. It was painful to read at first but it got better.

Please update soon.

You know, I remember reading this a while ago, but honestly, I didn't get very far with it. I blame real life interfering. That said, I must say, 1, this is awesome, 2, do you have an Elsword fetish, 3, great fight scene at the end there, 4, a cliffy, not cool, and finally five, are you ever going to continue this, and if so, when? Well, thanks for writing this, and bye for now.

love this story line can't wait for new chapters

Damn it awakening.

Nice story so far, but you really need someone to beta read it. It's not unreadable, but it is kind of annoying to read sometimes. The whole "figure," and "it," thing going on in this chapter is really unnecessary and very annoying. Most readers should probably figure out right from the get go that this mysterious figure is Harry's Big Sis, so why continue with the whole "it," thing?

Learn how to use past-tense.

HURRAY! Aisha is back! Yaaaay

Aww so nice.. Like it!

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Wwhhaaaatttt...
The mentor I remember was a jerk wad that sealed her powers in a ring and ran away laughing.
Something about being jealous...

Since I'm allowed to post only one review per chapter, I'm have no choice but to post as this chapter's review, while this is review for chapter 20(or 19 excluding prologue).
Let's see...
Black flames, I'm gonna guess they're just dark fire balls.
Spinning Stone Blade must be Hell Stone. Thought it was Hell Drop at first because it said descending there.
The one Aisha used right after must be Guillotine Press.
Giant Beam Angkor used must be Abyss Angkor.
Dark Fire ball again.
Chain Lightning.
Mana Shield.
Icicle Wave.
Plasma Cutter.
Hell Stone again.
Fire Balls, or more likely Chain Burst.
More Hell Stone.
Dash z x attack.
Binding Circle.
Mana Shield by Aisha this time.
Black orb must be Antigravity Ball.
Dark Cloud.
More Dark fire ball Phantom Breathing - Dark Fall.
and... Okay, nevermind. It takes too long to listing them all out... I'm gonna stop here.