This story was really deep and powerful.I wonder who the person is...I think its Draco but I may be wrong. I hope you continue writing like this because I want to read more of your work.

Love, Luck, and Lollipops!

Melissa

Powerful. Very potent.

This was beautiful!

Poetic and deep, and you've captured Draco exactly the way I imagine him to be.

Great story!

Go Draco! *cheers*

Excellent! Finally, Draco's not shagging someone senseless to not be evil! Yay!

Paige

Beautiful, I love how you captured Dracos personalliy.

What a stunning portrayal of Ron! Oh, sorry.

"I am spoiled, I am biased, I am prejudiced, but I am not evil." I find it interesting that Malfoy would admit that, even to himself, but I think it portrays his character very well. He was raised to be selfish and prejudicial, but I don't think an eleven year old can be exactly evil. I also think Draco would be as avidly against being "used" as you state.

Once again, for the record, you're a marvelous writer.

Cool fic.. very well written, I liked it!

Oh, I like. You didn't try to make him all sappy and not-mean. Yeah, I definitely liked that. It sounded very fierce and real, like something a person (even Draco) really would say. Brilliant.

That was really deep. Very good.

Wow. That was amazing. If you aren't, or are not going to become, a writer I shall be VERY surprised. This is pure genius and I loved it. It awe inspired me, as well as being full of insight to a character we don't really know, it was motivating and was extremely philosophical, nad held truth about our society.

I think this is a wonderful piece of writing. No more words can express it as directly as that.

Keep it up!

The Minnesotan in England

marzoog

"I am spoiled, I am biased, I am prejudiced, but I am not evil."

That is a great line. It's exactly how I like to picture Draco in my head- he's not a nice guy, but he's not evil either. Well, yet, anyway. I hope JK's Draco turns out like this.

Wonderful job.

Who the Heck is that? If it is Harry, you must not have a very high oppion of James. Anyway, This one is one of my favorites.

are u gonna do anything else about the story? well i hope you are i really like it :o) nothing like a little dragon rebel

Wow...I love it.

Bravo! That was a really good portrayal of Draco...(heh, it'd be kinda funny if everyone's convinced it's Draco and it turns out to be like, Neville...sorry, I have an odd sense of humor..) Anyway, congratulations on such a wonderful fic! I absolutely adored it! Can't wait to read more from you! Cheers, and happy writing! ~*~Branwen~*~