I don't like watching heart wrenching movie as much as reading. When I found one, I stop immediately before the water works start. But not this one. I can't stop reading this story even if I'm about to cry. This is just so good that I don't want to miss it. Keep the good work.

PS. Cell X reminds me of Space X.

Idk I feel like Ryu and Shige are being too harsh on the MiraGen. Esp since it was Akashi who actually found a cure for Tetsu. Regardless of that, I love your story so much! I think this is the 4th time Im re-reading this

this fic is one of the best I've read, has entered my top ten favorite fanfics
This fanfic captivated me in a way that I do not even know how to explain
Congratulations on the great work.
sorry for any typos

Where is the overprotective gom?

you summarized this by stating how it was going to "change the team as a whole" and also tagged in "overprotective!gom" which is nice and all if not for the fact that these only apply to literally the first three to four chapters. no offense, but your oc ryu was in all the significant events when it should've been the gom, if ryu was going to be the focus of most of this you should've at least let the readers know in the summary and the like, so we don't go reading on expecting more of the gom when they're not really as significant to the plot as you seemed to make it out to be

This was a lovely story, quite emotional, however at the end I feel like there should’ve been some focus / attention on Akashi - a lot of credit should go to him since if it wasn’t for him, Kuroko would’ve basically died. Akashi’s actions spoke volumes and yet I feel there was little recognition in that.

Thank you for writing this story! I feel like it is an official anime/manga! I have enjoy reading this story and it's now 3:20am here in the Philippines! And while reading this I'm listening to 'Someone leaving' and I cried hard!
Hope there's a book 2 of this story!

PS: Sorry for my english

Generation of assassins sounds really interesting but I couldn’t find it on your page, is it still coming?

finallly...
kuroko isn't dead..
yeayyy

EEEHHHH? IS IT DONE ALREADY? Honestly, i really love this story. each chapter almost make me cry. A good ending on this story too. but i want to see more of GoM time with Kuroko. I mean, if its a team that break and you're going to make them one again is your plot here, then it should be GoM who is really the main character of the story. At first, I was sure that is what youre aiming. but on the later chapter, it is not. and, where's GoM idk lol. but then, it is your story. you are the one who choose what to write. and i enjoyed this story line too. so, good job!

That was great! I cried nearly every chapter. I do have some complains though. First, Shige and Ryu's characters are a bit over the top, emotional to put it bluntly. Especially Ryu. They were being overly dramatic and it was kind of annoying. I was kinda hoping they would make up with GoM and actually form some friendship in between and not just arguments and indifferences. They probably would have formed a good relationship if they tried. Second, I felt like everything was rushed with too much narration. Lastly, I thought that the whole GoM would be the one to do the whole protecting and fussing over kuroko in the hospital so I was a little disappointed they didn't have much scenes in this fic. But yeah other than that it was great! I'd give it a 8.5 over 10.

This was a really good story! I enjoyed reading it without taking a break in the middle, that's for sure! It became even more emotional when I kept that piano piece playing on repeat, I almost cried at one point of the story... I have to admit (sadly) that Ryu and Ogiwara /pissed/ me off. I don't blame them though, though I don't exactly side with the GoM either, I wish there was a part where they all made up. It got me rolling when Ryu and Ogiwara started to point fingers at the GoM, even though they were trying their best with Akashi even flying outside the country to find a cure. Nonetheless, I'm glad that this ended on a happy note!

The premise of the plot is great, and the characterisation is not so far out that they appear off from that of what we already know. However, regarding the flow of your sentences and paragraphs, it becomes slightly difficult to read especially when there are so many tense issues. Your mixing of present and past tense creates confusion between sentences and therefore detracts from the atmosphere that you've strived to build up throughout the story. The other literary elements of the story are quite sophisticated though; this is probably the biggest criticism I have of your work. Keep it up!

Seriously? Noone's upset with the sheer lack of unexpected events in the plot? Not to insult the writer, I even kind of enjoyed the drama itself since I didn't stop in the middle of it and I understand that this was written years ago, the writer must have advanced plot-wise since he clearly has talent with phrasing and putting emotions in there. But I knew what would happen chapters before it happened. It went clock-wise. The way it has been dragged on and on without any twists was annoyingly boring. Emotional yeah, but way over dragged. Would have been cathartic if we didn't know that Kuroko would survive or there was something else going on in the sidelines than Akashi's secretive but obviously successful travel to America that hinted at the happy end in the middle of the fic. Aside these, it was well-written, I'm just annoyed with the predictable plot but that's my problem since everyone seems to have only positive feelings about this fic here. It's just a critic that you can either accept and improve or feel upset about. I definitely didn't intend to insult you.

Holy shit that was tense