Reviews for 2 Pronged Attack
Thimond chapter 11 . 7/7/2013
Okay, I just finished the story. Its fairly good so far. I'm not good at reviewing so I'm just gonna say, Its good. 7/10. not a classic, but it has potential, so I'll follow.
Thimond chapter 5 . 7/7/2013
I'm only about 1/3rd of the way through but I cant help and notice. eyes that can predict movements, cause hallucinations and memorize things at a glance. And the ability to control plants and wood. what next? the rin'negan? Not a complaint, just something i noticed.
Shoveler chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
really good
Kairan1979 chapter 11 . 3/19/2013
Excellent story.
Looking forward to see more.
I think if Harry finds out about Quirrell, he can pin Snape's murder on him (after all, he was a spy for Dumbledore).
Stealing the Stone is very in character for this Harry (and let Dumbledore think that the stone was destroyed).
As for Tracy, maybe he can start the rumor that she was related to Snape (another false trail).
Project Pseudonym chapter 10 . 2/27/2013
You do realize that they are technically still 11 years old and have yet to reach puberty right? I'm not sure if it's possible for an 11 year old boy to have an erection...
Rake1810 chapter 6 . 2/21/2013
First of all, sorry for all the times you've gotten perved on, but in all fairness if you're an attractive woman it's hard to hide the...proof that we think you're attractive. Though the staring deserves a slap to the head. Fun story and curious how muh teenage relationships are going to be important to the story as opposed to Harry just being a horny teenager.
OregonDucks chapter 10 . 1/29/2013
Awesome story!
iitrnr chapter 10 . 1/20/2013
Great story. The only bit I found odd was that Harry got caught by Tracey when he was trying to stay hidden.
jc chapter 8 . 1/18/2013
begining of ch 8 he says i'll be joining you in arithmancy and comc she doesn't list it as one of hers
kidneysrgood chapter 10 . 1/17/2013
Just saw this up on hpfanficarchive. Nicely done. Keep it up. I'll be adding this to my C2 group.
ObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 10 . 1/17/2013
Great story so far. I like how Harry was raised and all his enhancements to help in his task. Nice lemon and well done. Thanks for sharing!
serialkeller chapter 10 . 1/17/2013
Awesome, loved the lemon :D
Dream Bound Nightmare chapter 10 . 1/17/2013
Hehe Draco broke his leg... Update!
karthik9 chapter 10 . 1/17/2013
It is excellent chapter.I look forward to future updates.
eric chapter 8 . 1/9/2013
Why did you have Harry interogate Snape if he already
read his mind? I understand the "torture" part and even killing him but why the pretense?
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