I think you’re an incredible author and I really hope you come back to this one day or make something new. I’d read anything you wrote.

Okay, this is just- MY FAVORITE Avengers FIC EVER! I love the complexity of Loki and Natasha's relationship, I love how they are constantly trying to get a one up on each other, this chapter was just CHAOS and I LOVEE IT. This is probably one of the only Loki fics I've found that I like without reservations. Mainly because the ones I found didn't satisfy me, either they tried to 'redeem' Loki or made the OC so boring and normal and basically an incubator and I hate when writers make the relationships define the person, and I loved that you did none of that. You made it fucking awesome sauce, and everything is so complicated. Natasha is so complicated, everyone is so in character and you made them feel more REAL Loki is such a complex character and any relationship, romantic or otherwise, would be complicated and you just- UGH I LOVE YOU.

Hey, I don't know if you're still there, but I just wanted to say that I love this story and its characters and its nuances and the suspense, and if you don't update again I think there will always be a small piece of me waiting, wondering how it ends. Even after all this time, I think about it far too often.
So if you're planning on writing more, please do it for me 3

This story - and its prequel have been on my reading list for ages, and I finally got round to read them :D Now I'm annoyed that it took me so long to get round to it! I am really enjoying this story :D I love how Natasha and Loki's 'relationship' had grown and developed, but they still don't see themselves as a couple or in love ... at least they haven't had the balls to admit it yet :) The thing I loved the most about this chapter was that Natasha got Jarvis to take Hill to safety - even though Hill and Tasha don't see eye to eye most of the time :D Did Jarvis do that by enclosing the suit around Hill's body, (like the suit does to Pepper in Iron Man 3), or did he take control of the suit and physically carried/flew her out?
I hope you get round to updating this story :D It's been a while, but a girl can hope!

So Glad you're still updating. This story is incredible, I can't wait til the next update!

Please update

Ah, I'm so glad this story isn't abandoned - each and every chapter update reminds of how ridiculously good it is.

I have a ton of homework to do, and a play to go to before the day's out.
And usually in times like these I ignore fanfiction updates.
But I check up on this story periodically and when I got an e-mail I got very happy. This was such a good chapter! I love how you write Natasha and Loki and I forgot how much I loved it until I read this chapter.
This is probably my all-time favorite fic ever. Just because you write it so well, and I'm not a fan of frostiron, or genderbends, but you do so good with it!
Can't wait for the next update. :)

PLEASE tell me you're going to update. Please...? This story is just the BEST in every single way you can think of. You're writing, your plot, your characterizations! Just fantastic work! Please update. :D

Please please please update! I need you to! My life depends on you updating! Please!

Ok, first off, Loki is awesome in this! And his relationship with Peter, Pepper and Happy is excellent!

I don't like Stark very much in this one, I thought this was supposed to be FrostIron but I don't see much of that, and she treats Loki like crap. They are supposed to be together, and I see it from Loki but not Stark.

Also, I find the whole 'Loki's a bad guy, no matter what anyone thinks he'll only ever be a bad guy, he can't be trusted and he'll only ever betray us' whining that the Avengers are doing in every single chapter, is repetative and its getting annoying. God!

Loki is the God of Mischief, Fire and Chaos. As Chaos, Loki is the very definition of change! He can change easily cause that is what Chaos means, but he doesn't have to lose his snark, personality or power to change for the better.

And if you send Loki to the Negative Zone or Prison 42, I will never forgive you! Loki should be able to easily walk out like it was no big deal, that should serve them all right, thinking that they can contain a God.

Also, you keep going on all the time that Loki is a war criminal, which is wrong. To be a war criminal you have to have commited grevious crimes during war like torture, starvation, degredation to an extreme degree and murder, none of which Loki did. Also, at the begining of your story, Loki didn't even kill anyone and actually protected people, so he has done absolutely nothing to earn the title war criminal so I don't get where you get it from.

All in all, I love the dynamics between Loki, Peter, Pepper and Happy, but I really hope that Stark starts to be better towards Loki and that Loki kicks everybodies asses for doubting his abilities and his wrath towards Thanos.

I love chapter 27. It is plain genius! The complexity of Natasha's charater is astounding. I love this fic! Keep it up

That hurt to read. Especially since Iron and Cap I've grew up with are close and to read how powerful words can hurt... it hurt me! I cried lol Beautiful chapter.

As always, this chapter was amazing :) I like how everything is coming together. I hope to see another chapter soon :)

Damn man I think this is love. Echo, ur story is sensational, I'm afraid words cannot express how in love I am with this, at first I thought I'd whine about the lack of Natasha x Loki but I simply can't. The amount of time between them is perfect and realistic and wonderful, ur writing style is amazing and I find myself hard pressed to find something better. Now that I've reached the end of what is currently available I feel a void within me, it is a feeling I call the void, a feeling of being an addict to something and realizing that the thing you were addicted to no longer exists. That is my greatest fear and I felt it worsening as I drew to the end of this fic, I need more my friend.. More so much more. Your story is so fabulous that I find myself avoiding anything marvel or avengers related in fear that it could wreak this wonderful world you've set up for me. I normally don't review but you have inspired me. I especially love how real each interaction is. The misunderstandings the arguments the love. It makes my heart race (and I'm not much of a rormacist) I would like you to know that you are the first to Elicit such a reaction from me and that I am eagerly waiting for more. Please please update soon! Don't leave me to rot in the void. I love ur work! I'm so sorry to have rambled! I love u! :D I look forward to the next chapter!