I realyy enjoyed this. Thank you

Poor Alice i hope her and her baby are ok.

No i dont like it she must like punishment.

That story was so bad I think it gave me cancer.

You said you wanted to keep the story realistic. No one is this sad and pathetic as you’re making Bella that’s not realistic. I hope you’re not as naïve and pathetic over a man as you’re writing your character to be.

This is horrible. Bella is an idiot. He broke up with her so he could have sex with other people, and she didn't try to fuck anyone! PATHETIC

WHAT THE FUCK DOES SHE MEAN "I WILL"?
Just like that shes gonna forgive him? FUCK THAT AND FUCK HIM.

I dont agree with ANY of Bellas behavior! She should have fucked Garrett! She never should have agreed to be Edwards friend! She sure as shit shouldnt be in a hotel room with him right now.

Bella just comes off as fucking stupid to me. If a guy broke up with me cause he wanted to fuck other people I would never be his damn friend. And if he called me cying I would call him a pussy and hang up.

I cant believe Edward literally broke up with her so he could fuck other people. What a piece of shit.

I like the short chapters.

The ending was so disappointing though.

It’s sweet, but E is immature... obviously he didn’t realise that finding true love is more precious than a string of girlfriends.

At least she was honest about it.

It’s good Bella has the opportunity to make things right.

That’s a good point, but sad Edward made her feel that way.

I think she deserves it...