Wow. This was so touching and emotional. *claps* well done.

They were very in character! This was amazing~!

awwww sooo cute.
I love both Italys but Lovino is my is my favorite bc well...
HE NEEDS MORE LOVE DAMN IT

It was really accurate!

To me they are both OOC. Especially Roma-chan... I couldn't even imagine him crying over that reason... This story made me burst into tears. Good thing none of my relatives saw me. Whew. Ah, I like their brotherly love. Hetalia should really make this story real. Its touching. I would watch that episode over and over again until our house is flooded into tears...

That part when Roma-chan said that he was useless and he faded, was just... Tearful. I can imagine Feli trying to grab on to his fratello's hand while Lovi fades... I could even imagine an alternate ending about Lovi really DID disappear and then Feli would all go like, 'why did you leave me...' sort of thing. But, that's just sad. I like your ending better. It makes me smile to see their bonding time.

And the last part where Lovi was the one who painted the painting of Grandpa Rome is... I dunno, I guess I'm at loss of words...

its really wonderfull!

Beautiful story! I loved reading this very much! Great job!

;_; so beautiful brotherly love

It's a pleasant and positive story and I liked to read it.

*loves* So sweet.

Aww! This was so touching! It's so sad to see Romano have doubt about himself. But it's wonderful that Italy is around to remind him of his own self-worth. You've really captured their brotherly love so well! 3

I loved it! I always wondered why Rome never seemed to visit Romano too. Anyway I loved the story. I really like family stories like this. :)