Martin is kinda annoying he reads like an expy of Mordin Solus from Mass Effect, which comes across as pretty jarring.
He sounds more like a robot than a person.

Hi there,

your are one of the best authors out there, so if you feel the urge to continue your stories, don't squash it! :D

Greetings from Germany

Just an FYI. Summer vacation is only two months, not three. Per canon, each Hogwarts year consists of ten months. BTW, I enjoy "Will's chapterly insights". This chapter was pretty good. I hope Harry doesn't get too involved with the diary

A shame this was never continued, probably the best the author attempted to write.

magnificent. a smash. bravo. write more!

really enjoying mordin solus-esque character. well done

This is really interesting and I like Harry being in Slytherin and learning so much about people. Do continue!

Loving this story so far, and hope you get a chance to continue it. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Wow, if you wrote anymore on this I would love to read it.

I don't think you're writing on this anymore, but I love the Dumbledore / Voldemort interaction and your explanation for why the stone was guarded the way it was.

The Slytherins and Gryffindors are in same DADA class

It's been a while since I've read this, but I think I remember liking it and being interested in where it was going. But you don't seem to have been on here (the site, this story) in quite some time. Hope you're okay.

for awhile - for a while

We wouldn't them to fail - We wouldn't want them to fail

dirty-blonde smiled - Tracy Davis smiled (seemed weird to mentally call her dirty-blonde now that he knows her name, a definite article was also missing.)

Great chapter! Hope he finally settles it for this year. Has it been the whole year already or less?

See the story hasn't been updated for a couple years. I hope you're doing well and continue it at some point. Your writing is really good.