That was a nice ending. I liked how you wrapped everything up with Prowl's visit.

nice ending

great chapter

Interesting chapter. I am wondering if you are planning to give Rodimus and Mara a wedding. It might be fun to see the Autobots adapt to another human custom.

this is great

Cool chapter. I thought the Ratchet/Sludge reunion was cute. I hope we get to see Sludge and Wheeljack have one too. I am looking forward to the next one. I do have a question though; Would you consider Optimus Primal from Beast Wars to be the mate of Prime for that time period? :)

I think it would be fun if Bombshell hooked up with Swoop instead of an Aerialbot.

oh man. did not see that coming at the end

good chapter. it was a lille confusing for me any way with the switching of the pov's but other than that it was great

I am not sure if I should feel bad for Prowl or envy him in a way.

good chapter

Well that was a sad chapter. I am hoping that some of the others go back in time to help out. I would love to see a one-on-one match between Optimus and Grimlock. I feel it will have to be Grimlock as he is currently the only Autobot rival to Optimus's strength and endurance, excluding combiners. (Rodimus officially ranks 9/10 in strength while both Optimus and Grimlock were officially 10/10. I had them as toys back in the day.) Since I read Him Grimlock Have Opinions I have wanted to see a story where Ratchet and Wheeljack get to meet their grandsons The Technobots. (I have a story bouncing around in my head called From Extinction where this happens but it will be a super long time coming.) Don't feel you have to follow my suggestions to keep me happy though I'll enjoy your story regardless.

very good.

Everyone seems to be taking it easy while Blackarachia is still running around. Whose body is Grimlock going to have to recover.

I feel sorry for the Decepticon it your story. Will they every get a break and will Soundwave learn to not underestimate his sister, which I would like to read more about their sibling relationship.