ASDFGHJKL Tettttsssss *grin* I loved it It was truly beautiful *tear* :')

Hello,

As much as I think that this story is lacking Yamamoto x Tsuna relation, I'd say this story has so much meaning in each lines. It's beautiful. I shivers when I read the ending part. I'm not the judge but so far, I think your story has the most probable chance to win the competition. I'm not exaggerating and I'm not taking sides, especially since I joined the competition too. But that's my opinion. So, kudos for that, I guess.

To tell you the truth, this is the first time I've ever read a 4-5 YL fic. I don't really know about it, so I'm portraying it as TYL fic. Haha. I hope you don't mind.

Anyway, enough with this personal ranting, let's work on the review.

Your plot is amazing. The ending is fantastic. The way you put Tsuna saying that his angel is for his family is also nice too. The reason why I like it is because you didn't say that his angel is for Takeshi. It's different and unpredictable. But at the same time, it's a nice twist.

I would love to see more emotion in the story, especially from Yamamoto's side. You could describe it with more details to make the flowing of the emotions run well, like using thoughts or so. Lines are your best friend to portray the characters' emotions too. I mean, he lost something that he holds dear, right? You could give us more emotions on that part, maybe some kind of delving around the scene or what not.

I love the gesture and other details though. It's specific enough that I can imagine it really well in my mind. The story is nice too. I would like to see more interaction between Tsuna and Yamamoto. It would have been better if you explore the scene, maybe some talking, details, passionate stuffs like that. It would make the story more spicier.

All in all, what I like the most is the ending scene. :D It's very good. I think you will win with that ending part. Haha.

Anyways, keep up the good work! And, please give more love for Yamamoto and Tsuna pairing. It's such a weird thing that 8027 is so unpopular. :D Thank you for the goodness. I'd like to see more 8027 fics from you.

8027forever

Hello! Good job! This review signifies that I have read your story and that in exactly a day from when I review, I will record your score officially and permanently on my document!
So if you have any changes do it within a day or else you want me to postpone my judging, pm me! Thank you for joining my story!
Awesome job by the way! :DDD

O-ho-ho-ho. Don't ask me where the heck I got that laugh because I'd just laugh it off, ahaha! Anyway, congratulations for being the first one to upload a story to compete in the 8027 Christmas Challenge. Man, thank you! Thank you! 8027 is my OTP so I really appreciate this a lot.

Now to the review. I'm no critic, I admit that but I can somewhat help even with these small words of mine. A few spelling mistakes but hey, I also tend to do them. A beta reader would be good. I think I can, ahaha! Next, the pacing is good. The scenes are descriptive, nice and easy to picture. The giant Christmas tree with Angels on top is new to me. I guess it won't be a star on top of mine this year :)

Lastly, thanks for writing 8027! Thank you for sharing! Thank you for joining. I'll stop with my freakin' 'thank you's now. Yamamoto calling Gokudera by his first name and vise-versa is new to me too. It's possible... give or take a few years. xP

8027 rules!

Dang, I was hoping to be the first one to upload. Oh well. I like this one :) . I hope to upload mine in a few days, so I hope you'll read mine, too. Hope you do well in the challenge :) .

THIS IS SO FLUFFY!

So cute I'm not even a fan of 8072 or 8027, but this was FLIPPIN' adorable!

gj one more dot