I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!

Can you please update? This story is ssssssssssooooooooooooogood.

I like it

Hey that's my nickname except it's spelled CC

Can you make a story with octavian and fem!percy being paired together? Please?

Oh Lord I'm in love with this story! I've never thought of pairing percy with Octavian. Jason, Nico, Male Annabeth, Will... they've all been done before. But now I am utterly in love with this pairing. Why can't I be this good at writing?

I love this. I don't know about anyone else, but it almost brought tears to my eyes.

Can you not make this a one shot? This is really good!

good job

i really liked but it would be cool if octavian has feelings towards percy and he felt that spark 2 this story could have a lot of potential were it longer u know chapter 2,3,4,5,6,7...so on and so on but yeah ur a good writer

Cute Octavianxfem!Percy thingy going on there

Cute

Nice story :p I absolutely don't know who Octavian is, but I liked this story ;) Good work!

Not bad, I have actually been looking forward to this one since I saw it on your site. I do wonder where you plan to take it. I also like how you seem to have kept Octavian, on the surface at least, the same character he is in the books but with that added level of depth that keeps me resisting the urge to strangle him.

Your faithful reader,

Lord Jace

You should rewrite this into a full story, I love the Fem!Percy/Octavian pairing, simply because it's rare, unexpected, and Octavian has character.