As someone with both a biological father and a step-dad I have to say that I completely agree with the lines you gave Snape about being a dad. My stepdad really was my dad in everything but blood. I’ll miss him always.

delete this faggot story you sick fuck

please write more

you are an awesome writer! do not listen to what others say! i quite like your writing style. :D

I've read only one chapter and I am astounded by the ridiculousness and stupidity of this crap. Harry's hair lengthened after he was disowned? What the fuck? Remus and Sirius are about to be married and Sirius was unaware of Harry's situation? Remus never sought his help for Harry's sake? What THE fuck? Krum is preying on an ELEVEN years old? WHAT THE FUCK? I can believe Potters being neglecting but there is no way Lily would let ABUSE go. Seriously, only one chapter and UGH.

Damn the ending of this chapter and Harry's little meeting between rough boy and the wall...*blushes*
BUT I'll kill those- those treacherous,no good, backward, pigheaded, abusive, neglectful bas-*get's dragged away while still cussing*

Okay concept, but its poorly executed... all of your antagonists have the same character traits of being whiny and blowing up when they aren't getting their way. I understand that this is probably AU but this is makes it incredibly stupid the way it was written. I hope it gets better and you mature as a writer as it goes on, but I not going try and read the rest of this.

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HOW DARE U KILL HANNAH! Still luv da story doe

So this story turns from Viktor Krum/Harry Potter into a four-way relationship?, or is this just temporary?

Ryder/Victor/Cedric

Please, please update. I really want to know what's happens next. This is a really good story, I haven't found one like it before. Cant wait to seevwhat happens next :)

You Made Ryder have an Existential crisis. OMG! best decision ever made.

So let me get this straight, Harry is the ill say "submissive" and the other three are the "dominant" the reason I put it like this is because the three don't love each other as much as they seem to love Harry and Harry has brought them together. Did I get it right?

Ok so to start off this fic gripped me to begin with, I wanted to see Harry become strong and find love and have a family, you have a great imagination, however this was suppose to be a Hp fanfic and now Harry is more like a side charachter and the others like Hanna the lead. I will continue to read to see where this goes but to be honest you just throw too much ideas and changes each time and seem to have lost your original plan. I hope you find that magic again. Ps not a flame just input.