Perfect story and love the song will put it for my little princess to hear ….

Oooh, Sevvie is going to be the mum! I wish there were more of those fics around...

it missing in the end of the chapter again

Thanks for the story.

Hole in plot? How did Molly know Harry wasn't aware of how to get aboard the train? Was someone else also in the conspiracy. From the way Albus acts in "Truth" he doesn't appear to be a co-conspirator.

Interesting story.

Maybe he should have put down that the map would go to Teddy? Remus did help make it.

Totally a wonderful story

Sorry...only made it to chapter 15. Will try again later maybe. Too much talking, felt like I was reading the same conversation 5 times in a row. N two things that really bothered me...Um Harry cooked all the dursley's meals, why didn't he know how to cook? And Hermione didn't help? I can get behind her being a fake friend, but book one she reminds them how to pronounce wingardium leveosa, she helps figure out Flamel, she starts a fire, she figures out it's Devil's Snare, she figures out the potion. Book two she figures out it's a big freaking snake in the pipes. Book three she helps him go back in time. Book four she helps with spells. Book five she protects the group with a jinx parchment and helps take on Death Eaters. Book six, umm I'm sure there's something but can't think of anything major at the moment seven she helps protect them with wards, helps with horcruxes, saves him from Nagini, disfigures his face right quick...and all while helping them study and doing their honework.
Have her be fake if you'd like, but she did help keep Harry alive.

I wish that you had expanded on what the Grangers role in this whole thing was, and how Hermione got involved in the plot.

Aww, I wish you didn't make the twins bad, I mean they're my favorite Weasleys.

loved this story!

Love it, but wish it was longer or had a epilogue

are fred and george turn coats as well? so far i've seen ron, hermione, molly, arthur, ginny, and bill but nothing on fred george percy or charlie

I think it's so sweet that Severus got pregnant and he and Harry had an adorable daughter together and named her Lily Eileen :) cool story, the grammar could have been a bit better and it could have used some more details around the plethora of good dialogue, but one great thing you had was consistency. Your characters didn't shift their personalities at all; once you showed us who they were, that was who they remained. I find that a difficult thing to do. Great job! And thanks for writing :)