This is amazing. I love the way you actually address the truth of Martha's feelings without bashing her, and without making the Doctor the bad guy. You even made me sympathize with Joan Redfern and I can't stand her as a rule. Thank you for sharing this awesome slice-of-life with us; I can't wait for your next(?) Doctor Who fic!

This was really bittersweet, but I enjoyed it. That just sounds weird, but its true. The truth of Rose Tyler comes out and it is sad. I never really noticed it before, but Joan is really insightful. How she knew that she and Martha weren't strong enough to be able to handle the Doctor, but Rose had been. Oh Timothy. I did like him!

Thank you. Thank you for making me cry. *sob* This is beautiful... :,(

...Why are you doing this to me?! D:

Crying.. beautiful. Absolutely beautiful

I wish I could rate this with numbers because I don't really know how explain how great it is with words.

This was wonderfully done.

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. Thank you for sharing!

My feels... why must you hurt them?

Wow. This is fantastic.
Human Nature/Family of Blood are my favorite episodes, and those parts where John was trying to decide weather to turn back into the Doctor just broke my heart, but I never really thought about if he asked after Rose, or if he even dreamed of her. But it's really fitting, now that I think about it...
Anyways, I loved this. It's just perfect. Heartbreaking, but perfect all the same.