Wonderful story so far.

I really loved the first 2 lines. Quite the eye catcher.
Look forward to reading more.

The Chronicler

I'm glad you continued this! I thought it was never going to go anywhere. Maybe it won't take two years for the next chapter?

I'm sooooo happy you updated! That really made my day! Amyway, an amazing chapter, especially the Jensen-shots-his-father-at-sixteen. Definetly want to read more of that ;)
Have a nice day,
Sechee (who's too lazy to login so...)

So, it's almost exactly a year since you started this. That seems like a good time to continue, right? :)

Update soon please? :)

It's really good, please keep going

Just a little com' here to say "Hello! I liked the first chapter, are you gonna make another one? I hope so..."
With that said...
Merry Christmas ;)
Sechee

Oh no! Good start, can't wait to see what's next

Liking it