You are such a tease! Much love :D

I love this story!

:D

Interesting to think of how the story would've gone had the shinigami been different, the situation tweaked, and damn hilarious- or maybe painful- thinking if it'd been Urahara who'd trained him from the start.

Interesting concept! I've always thought that Shuuhei and Ichigo could've been besties if the plot turned another way. And wow, Love Psycho, huh? This could work for her Bleach Challenge 1 if you tweaked it that way too.

Nice portrayal of Hisagi's personality-calm and mature and professional. I'm a little surprised that Ichigo's not more suspicious of the random tattooed sword-wielding punk who just made a little girl disappear into thin air..but I guess his instincts are telling him things are all right. Would be interested to see if you decide to continue this, as it'd make for a unique read.

Mmm. Even though this is a one-shot, I wish you might continue it. It has great potential.

Ooh what an interesting premise. I really hope there will be more of this. Wonder who will end up holding the Hogyoku at this rate...

Love it! Would love to read more if the muse strikes!

This is very interesting; please update soon

oh come on, come on, COME ON! don't stop with just a oneshot! This is an AWESOME idea! well, I suppose if you don't want to continue it I suppose I could take this idea somewhere. If you don't want to continue it that is :D,
AWESOME start!

Heehee! I loveloveloveloveLOVE Urahara's entrance. It's perfectly in character! For something so short, the change in the story is a tad confusing, but I still like it. :)