I love this story! Lots of emotions were moved when reading through the chapters. Thank you so much for writing this!

This was...well written. Simple and clean, really. I liked it a lot :) You captured the growth of a relationship perfectly, and you actually built a world for these characters. If I had to pick on something, I would say maybe the Pokémon themselves are sidelined a little, but overall, I thoroughly enjoyed it :D

You had me in the first half, not gonna lie. Happy to see that Dawn recovered (phew!) :P

If i was Ash, there's no chance I'm getting back with a girl who be kissin someone else. I like this story's concept though, keep it up!

This is a great story so far and this chapter when I read it and saw "no need to worry" I screened YES THE PUNCHLINE!

2 hours and only 10 chaptes. Dude you're a boss

What the fuck!? 25 chapters!? Dude don't u got tired?! (Sorry for bad language)

Duuuuuuuude you used lInes straight out of Miracle! You're friggin awesome :)))))))

This was great, but a couple of things were left unresolved. The cause of Dawn's poisoning and what happened to Kenny?

Really good

Noooooooooooo, i could've fap to this :(

Wow what can I say other than What a Fanfiction this has been favourited on my PC and is definitely the best Pearlshipping Fanfic the world has seen good job

Your story was so amazing I just loved how it was put together and I can't wait to read New Beginnings I'm so excited

An awesome awesome awesome awesomw awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome story

This story was absolutely amazing! I read it all in one day and just loved it. Everything was written very beautifully and with so emotion. I really loved reading it.