This is brilliant beyond belief, seriously how did you come up wth this? It's a shame that this is only a one shot. It has so much potential to be a truly awe inspiring, epic masterpiece of a multi chaptered fic.

Very nice. I enjoyed how you crafted a whole different universe with such depth using such a small amount of words. The way you made Ulquiorra a soul eater was unique and clever.

This was a really awesome idea! I think you should definitely elaborate on it, it would make an amazing series. But that's of course up to you. I just really enjoyed reading this. Keep up the excellent work!