| Reviews for Pokegirl Black and White |
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  Guest chapter 33 . 9/19/2016 Don't worry. Take your time! |
 eldarfan1 chapter 2 . 6/14/2016 does snivy have his speed maxed out?! PS. the "tackle" was more an Extreme speed attack. |
| peachgloss chapter 32 . 12/12/2014 YER BACCCCCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK *weird dance* |
| forestshasow chapter 2 . 1/26/2014 If this is not your shop, get the figg off and swim. PRICELESS! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/17/2014 I want to keep reading, it's so enticing and fun to read! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/17/2014 I love it! It's really well written, it didn't shove the character's down my throat and the set up as superb! I love it! |
| Doodling Shadows chapter 4 . 12/15/2013 I was rereading your series again, since I kinda sidetracked off of it(heheheh), but I noticed that when Professor Juniper is talking about why they are being sent, you repeat an entire paragraph. That big block of text and the one right after it is where it's repeated. It starts with "You should restrict yourself to the obvious things in life..." I would probably remove the first one before you repeat it so it sounds a bit better. Otherwise, besides a few minor grammar/spelling mistakes here and there, it's overall good in that aspect. Just that one repeated paragraph kinda splits the flow and makes me pause a bit. Happy Writing! _-*Doodling Shadows |
| Raid The Stormcaller chapter 29 . 12/8/2013 I love this story, it's got a great feel to it that I can't describe keep up the good work :) -nexus5117 |
| peachgloss chapter 28 . 11/25/2013 Hihi! :D It's your loveeeellyyy beta, CANDY! Lol Screaming of Mina's name... :/ "MINNNNNAAAAA MIIIIINNNNNNNAAAAA MIIIINNNNNNAAAA MIIIIINNNNNAAAAA" Byyyyeeeee SUSHI! Candy OUT. |
| peachgloss chapter 27 . 11/10/2013 AHHHH I JUST NOTICED THIS FANFICTION HAS BEEN WEIRDLY CRAZY AHHH I'M SO SOOOOORRRRRYYY SUUUUUSSSSHHHHIIIIII PLLLEEEEEASEEEEEE FOOOOOOORGIIIIIVEEEEEEE MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE Ahem. Sorry... Fanfiction was weird and crazy... And stopped sending me email... I'M SOOOORRRRRY |
| Nightraze chapter 27 . 9/12/2013 Great chapter! Update soon! |
| Y-ko chapter 1 . 9/9/2013 Hahaha, are you actually unironically quoting Linkin Park? |
| Rudolphsd chapter 26 . 8/15/2013 what happened to panpour? is she/ he (i forgot) dead? |
| Rudolphsd chapter 19 . 8/15/2013 MINA'S ARGUMENT JUST BECAME INVALID! |
| Rudolphsd chapter 9 . 8/1/2013 hmmm... this looks interesting. I'm writing a Pokemon black fanfiction that might get some hate from using so many legendary and foreign pokemon involved with the main character, but i sometimes have block. Summer is ending and I have three chapters. :( Anyway, the reason my White is going to team up with Reshishram is because Reshishram is white, and the main character's name is White. A little part of my brain cannot stand the feminine pokemon with the male hero. I got white as well, but mainly because it had solosis insted of gothoria, and lilligant instead of whimsicott, that sort of thing. I will follow this. Good luck! |
