| Reviews for Harry Dursley and The Chronicles of the King |
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   MattBlack chapter 57 . 6/29 VERY unlikely that someone who fear being alone etc, what with fidelius growing up... Also, hearable isn't a word, you're thinking of audible. In german and scandinavian a direct translation would be hearable though...Hörbar in swedish for example lol... |
| capctr chapter 1 . 5/28 Hmm... |
| Icxi chapter 6 . 5/22 Oooh, I love that foreshadowing. It's an interesting AU you're building here. :) |
| aamlkb chapter 26 . 5/16 Poor Harry. That kid can never catch a break |
| aamlkb chapter 22 . 5/16 Now I see why it’s such a long story. There’s so much going on. |
| aamlkb chapter 21 . 5/16 Poor Harry. I’m so confused. Which I guess is the point as we are living the story through Harry’s eyes. |
| VeryPeeved chapter 52 . 4/28 ...are you implying that the dementors are made out of the souls taken by the dementor's kiss? that... makes them simultaneously more and less horrifying than they are in canon. |
| VeryPeeved chapter 34 . 4/26 "Outside of a room there are three light switches, within a room there are three bulbs, you may only enter the room once. How do you find out which switch works with which bulb?" well that one is obvious: you leave the door open. |
| xtremenish chapter 88 . 12/4/2019 This has to be one of the MOST CONVOLUTED STORIES out there. I have been reading fan fiction for a long long time and have went through my share of twisting stories, but this one takes the cake. Till chapter 60's you can still understand, but post that with the time turners the author actually lost the plot and created another fantasy world with so many narratives that it was impossible to keep track of the story. Maybe the plot was great but the story just stopped making sense. These are my 8 hours I am never getting back :( |
| Anonymous420 chapter 87 . 11/17/2019 My only complaint with the story is that it only makes sense because of the author's notes. Great as the storyline is, it crumbles under the weight of trying to do too much. Exposition outside of the actual chapters is the only thing that makes it even remotely possible to follow this story, which (at least for me) takes a lot away from how good it is. |
| fhl1234 chapter 3 . 10/29/2019 Interesting. |
| fhl1234 chapter 1 . 10/29/2019 Excellent first chapter. |
| death390 chapter 2 . 7/24/2019 Lilian potter yeah I’m out. |
| Cindy chapter 3 . 6/18/2019 :O And, once again, things change. I don't think I like Harry's cousin very much... |
| Cindy chapter 1 . 6/18/2019 This is... Very interesting... It's completely off center like a true Alternate Universe. It's close enough that we're immediately invested but different enough that it won't be the typical storyline. We'll never know what's coming next, even when we know what's coming next xD |
