| Reviews for harry potter and deaths angels |
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   noylj chapter 5 . 7/6/2019 I wouldn't return to the magical UK How did Bumble's and Lucy not see Harry? |
| Rebmul chapter 11 . 10/20/2018 I would have loved to see a scene with his ex friends here so did hermione die sometime in 2nd,3rd or 4th year. |
| Rebmul chapter 10 . 10/20/2018 I have one question where the hell was hermione in all this |
| Monster King chapter 11 . 2/11/2018 Great story I really liked it a lot good job writing the story. |
| xNaruHina chapter 11 . 1/22/2018 This was an amazing story aside from the obvious grammar and spelling issues. Well done, definitely adding it to my favourites list. :) |
| xNaruHina chapter 7 . 1/22/2018 I vote for 5 :) |
| HeartsGlow chapter 2 . 8/13/2015 She is only 13/14, and he's just 15. Too young to believe in "Forever love" yet. :) The 3rd task happened in May, so he was arrested in May. So 2 weeks and 3 days in Azkaban means he was sent there July 18th. They waited 2 months to have his trial then, I guess. Just trying to keep things straight. |
| Gleas chapter 7 . 3/2/2015 Hawaii in the mediterranean? o.O I think your use of the word "Convocation" is off... The meaning and context it is used in do not quite match |
| Gleas chapter 5 . 3/2/2015 Did you actually suggest optionC?! Nutter... |
| sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 11 . 12/2/2014 Not enough revenge on the betrayal. |
| sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 8 . 12/2/2014 Pathetic Harry, stupid Daphne. Her sister was wanted by Voldy and she still went back to Hogwarts. |
| sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 6 . 12/2/2014 Gosh, more anger from Harry! Your Harry is so bland. |
| sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 4 . 12/2/2014 Very soft Harry, pathetic really. I can't believe he was very cool about the betrayal and the theft by Dumbledork and the Weasleys. |
| Bobmin356 chapter 7 . 9/26/2014 I'm sorry but I can't read any further. From the first chapter this has been a train wreck full of plot holes, poor grammar and bad spelling. Your English teacher must be very embarrassed to have you as a student. It's Wizengamot, not Wizamgot. Bookmark the Harry Potter lexicon so that you don't keep messing with canon names/places/spells etc... Capitalize names! PUNCTUATION is not optional! sigh... I can't go on. This is awful, if it were printed on paper I would burn it. |
| Ashlin Raine chapter 3 . 6/23/2014 Why did it have to be Astoria Greengrass? I would have at least had Harry with either someone that is in the story a bit more, like her sister. Astoria isn't named at all if I remember. Or . . . maybe in the hideous epilogue married to Draco Malfoy. Oh well, at least it's not Ginny or Hermione. |
