Finally I hate merle dieing but ive never read a story where his death actually made me smile and cry at the same time loved this

Spectacular! Awesome! So many 'feels' here, from one end to the other and everything in between! Another new fav for me along with "Something Else", totally awesome story. I intend to read all your Caryl fics, and wish you'd just keep on writing more and more! You're a talented author; thanks for sharing with the Caryl fandom.

Wow. That was a surprisingly deep and moving story, it surprised me because it was quite short. I liked reading it, since each chapter seemed like 1,000 words or so, it was fun. Well done. I really loved Daryl's flashback at the end, it hit me right in the feels. Thank you for writing this, it was beautiful.

Oh no Carol with no hope. I think Merle needs to fix this for his baby brother :)

I am crying. I am seriously crying.

Great job!

Love it! The best I have read

That was hard. Merle dying was so hard!
Great story!

My favorite contemplative parts of this chapter are the air/suffocating lines and "A dead animal would have to replace the words he couldn't say".

This was beautiful

Amazing way to finish a chapter! Loved this :)

I sit here with tears in my eyes after just having read your beautiful story. I loved it!

Omg this was worse than how it happened on the show. Mannn sooo dang sad :(

Well that got super sad super fast, great ending though.

Awww no, this is too sad. Merle...