I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work!

A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story.

dude(not trying to be mean its basically a saying) continue this story it is amazing

How? You said that kyuubi's chakra basically absorbs and destroys chakra (sasuke's fireball)... so danzo COULDN'T have stopped the explosion. It should have been PHYSICALLY IMPOSSIBLE for him to do so...Why would danzo of all people be elected? Number one the clan heads HATE him, the NINJA hate him so nobody would DO ANYTHING he said, the second he showed off his root, he'd be fired for treason and why would the diyamo even want someone as OLD AND FEEBLE as sarutobi, when sarutobi and his DINOSAUR ways was how they LANDED in all the trouble... Seriously if one OLD AND DECREPIT mind was the CAUSE of the mess, your not going to put ANOTHER poster child for senility in their place! Face it, danzo's time is OVER, his chance (if he ever had one) at ruling has LONG PAST, He's the football hero from high school that can't ever let go of those memories because they're the last time he MATTERED to ANYBODY! Sarutobi indulged his ALEHEIMER'S DISEASE delusions for some unknown reason, but I highly DOUBT anybody else would! He'd be seen as a very FEEBLE, very weak, half-dead already poster child for the leaf (and after an attack and losing their jinchuriki) that is NOT what they want to be showing the rest of the world right now, the diyamo SHOULD have just LAUGHED IN HIS FACE and told him to UP THE DOSE on HIS MEDICATIONS!

I thought naruto was going to "settle some debts"... Not play around with garaa?!

Why would there be two keys? And why would he need them? He was perfectly able to SMASH the seal all on his own in canon (in fact the third was scared he'd smash it when mizuki attacked), and how would the sage's son use the path of unity, IF HE DIDN'T EVEN HAVE A BIJUU? That kinda doesn't make sense. And working together(harmony)? AGAIN if he wasn't a jinchuriki then, wouldn't that be out too? I don't mean to rain on your parade, but the explanation and the circumstances are kinda AT ODDS with one another. Also didn't naruto have tattoos (powers) ALREADY all over his arms? So how did he see THESE seals go up his arm, if they're already covered in tats? (bijuu barrier being ONE of them)

ROFL, garaa vs. negji? Gentle fist against someone that it CANNOT HIT? He'd be MUTILATED! It wouldn't be a fight, it would be a ONE-SIDED SLAUGHTER! Same with naruto vs. sasuke, the uchiha doesn't even have a PRAYER! These two fights should be EMBARRASSINGLY easy!

Actually no, the gates really aren't enough, considering kurama can hold it's own against the ten-tails and it can REARRANGE continents and basically blow up the world! So ya, gates, no gates, still should be able to make mince-meat out of anyone in the story! Kinda why I thought the whole "akutski" thing was a cop-out, a hack... Naruto ESPECIALLY with kyuubi's help and power should have been able to just CURB-STOMP them all into BLOOD SMEARS and go home in time for supper! My opinion is konoha made a HUGE mistake by mistreating him and it's one that ISN'T getting forgiven or redeemed, kinda one of this "unpardonable sins" that makes the WORLD HATE YOU for the rest of existence. Their ONLY chance is that NOT EVERYBODY was in on the stupidity! So the ones that WERE are allowed to DIE OFF (for the good of the village) and the others will take over.

Kinda already figured that with the blood, I like the idea of acidic blood, I mean naruto get's kicked and punched enough that it honestly makes a good defensive/offensive weapon. Plus it's a great last minute "screw you" to anyone that would be gunning for him AND it keeps EVERYTHING of his out of vermin's control(danzo, orochi, etc). Why didn't his blood eat through the sword? Or orochimaru for that matter, as there would be MORE then a little drop, also how did that stupid seal of orochi's work again? I thought naruto DISSOLVED things that touched him when he had his cloak up. I don't care that orochi lived, but I think naruto should REALLY do SOMETHING about this "SEALING PROBLEM" he has, this is the SECOND TIME a seal has messed with him, if people learn about such a GLARING weakness, EVERYBODY is going to be using seals all the time! (and they DO in canon) I LIKE THIS NARUTO BETTER, I hated the "always rolling over naruto" those stories SICKEN me.

The hokage, has ALWAYS been a paranoid MESS about everything he SHOULDN'T and NOT worry about anything he SHOULD! As for what I would do? MOST CERTAINLY NOT, REPEAT NOT seal up ANYTHING with naruto... Keep him AWAY from the villagers? Yeah, give him a big butt mansion and make it so NOBODY else could get into it? (possible), Let naruto just go on murder sprees? Yeah probably I would! But NO sealing!

I'd actually like to see that part about the hamster ball

Shadow CLOWN Jutsu? So Shadow Demon Clowns? Clowns are already creepy enough dude.

The word you were looking for is 'Clone'

Hmm, the lemon itself was good, short, but good. Next time try to make it longer and add in some fluff instead of just sex, that will make the lemon go from just sex to making love. :)

Ehh, Naruto losing to a younger version of himself, how disappointing. His interaction with Temari was great though. She is so cute~

Mehh, you really had Naruto get sealed again? Even with Kurama helping? What.