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OMG! I totally love this! The way you wrote this was absolutely superb! You totally had me feeling down and mellow, but at certain times, you pretty much had me giggling like a mad man :)

This was one hell of a one-shot, and quite frankly, I'm surprised it doesn't have many reviews...

Among others (re:the whole thing), my fav quotes from this are:

"It could have been the absence of the Hōgyoku, or the absence of a crazed madman with a god complex",
"the requisite 'Surrender, demon!' and 'Go fuck yourself and die in a fire'", and
"Grimmjow dismissed the entirety of the Gotei 13 with a wave of his hand".

Of course, they're all much cooler in context, obviously. But these parts in particular made me grin. Thanks for that

Queen Ichigo...Strawberry Queen...uggh blech, ya he's right, it doesn't sound right. Kind of a...different style Grimmjow has when it comes to...what is it? Mating? Proposing? Anyywayys, whatever he does I'm sure it's perfect for Ichigo. Never thought he was one for sweet nothings anyway. Great story again btw - you really have a knack for writing natural. Now if you'll excuse me, I'm going to go kill those shinigami for treating Ichi so bad :D