This was cute!

Oh wow. This was awesome. My favorite lines were:

1) "Look, I'm no nun"

because to me, that has dual meaning. I don't know if you frequent Nuns With Pens, but it's a site for all who love to drool over Jensen Ackles. So I'm no nun, can be taken to not only mean "I have sex," but also "I'm not one of those girls whose obsessed with you." Ha!

and

2)"I'm already pining for one man in love with Max Guevara, I'm not going to make it two."

because it's just such a great line! *beams* Go Asha! Tell it like it is! Whoo! (hehe. don't mind me... *shifty eyes*)

But this fic so deserves to be more than a one shot! I know you wrote this years ago, but still, it'd be so great if you could write more of it. I mean, you have Alec so completely in character and you even did a great job of writing Asha, a character that I normally don't give a second thought to. (But, as stated in my above cheering, here I completely love! *beam*) Really, this would be such a great beginning to an even greater fic! *makes puppy eyes* Pleasse?

i love this! it's so realistic.. and the whole a/a angle is nice..

i was actually thinkin' along these lines when i saw 'borrowed time' (the a/a scene at crash) and i was just 'Asha, ur so dense!' can't u see that alec's jealous too? why don't u point it out?'

so yeah, i like it that u make asha to be a bit smarter here

Nice small fic, was it a stand alone. in your note you said its the first one you fin so were probebly not gong to get a sequel, ow well. cant wait for you M/A Stories you've got in the works, if there all well writen as this is i cant wait. we need as much Max and Alec fics as possible now DA has been cancled. good job

oh that was very very good. Sequel? yes, Please!

i like this story line so far. you should keep it going.

Oooh...I love it! Well written, and with very good characterizations. I hope there's more!

A dozen M/A's in the works! I hope they're all as good as this. I can't wait till you start getting them out.