Wow. I really like this story and I can't believe all the turns this story took. There were grammar mistakea and wors repititon (ex: one one), but it didn't take from thw stoty to much. The characters are great (although I don't like that Logan is a bit of a prick, he seemed quite nice at the beginning). I hope Collin and Leah imprint as well as Logan. I wonder what's going to happen with Scar's mom and her father since she has to go over. I wonder if the Voturi will be interested in her if Clementine goes to them. I wonder if Clementine will let slip the "special gift" to other covens who might want the same thing Julien wanted, and if they will come to try to take her. I really like Scarlet because she is almost exactly like a 15 year old. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE. This story is a good one and if you don't continue it will be a waste of a good, original story and great OC's

-Cynthia

Thanks for writing! I missed your writings so much when you were gone, I remember reading like 20 chapters in a row when I discovered your story (I had school next day and stayed up for like 5 am reading because I was so caught in it, not kidding) I signed up for the website just for your story and this is my first time to comment something here, I just had to, at least in one of your chapters because I had to thank you and say congrats! :) love from Colombia! I will wait for your next chapter!

Well, I totally loved your story until you ruined it by changing Scarlett into a vampire. So thanks for that, I was just hoping for the perfect love story, but no

I love the story! Keep writing! I wasn't sure if I liked the whole Scarlett turning into a vampire thing, but after reading more I loved it!

I have a suggestion: Maybe u could not only let clementine have her child, but maybe let scarlett and renesmee have children, too. I mean, u were probably gonna do that already, but its just a suggestion...

This story is perfect! Can't wait to know what's going to happen next

I love Seth and Scar together, but why did you do this? It's not that I want them to suffer, but it was a good idea and now it wasn't even his fault! You should have carried on with the betray story :(

I wish Scarlet had the ability to take away the baby too. That way she could get rid of it and then tell them all to fuck off.

I feel bad for Scarlett. I cannot wait for more.

ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING ME?! Everyone is a betch right now, and Seth's the biggest of them all. No...just...no. I can't even right now.

WTF? Rosalie's being a complete betch right now...

My favorite part of this chapter was: "You're like best friends with my dad." You've managed to turn Edward into Nessie's Dad who's still our old Edward from Twilight... That's something to be applauded for! I definitely wasn't expecting Rose to turn against Scarlett, especially since she can supply a child, but I suppose it'll work its way out. I don't like the idea of Clementine betraying Scarlett, but it's inevitable. Update soon!

I cannot wait for more.

Oh wow. I cannot wait for more.

I love this story so much Seth is just the cutest little thing.