Reviews for Leo
MoonlightMiracle.SakurianaHime chapter 7 . 10/15/2018
I’m begging for you to please please please update soon!
EmotionlessGirl291 chapter 6 . 1/27/2014
Change My Mind.. Jelu!
EmotionlessGirl291 chapter 7 . 11/3/2013
A very good story you had here.. I think that this is a Lolu story its fine with me but half of me is wanting Jelu... I don't know how I start to love Jelu actually... I'm a big fan of Graylu at first.. Anyways.. UPDATE FAST... UPDATE...UPDATE...UPDATE...
SionnachRuadh chapter 7 . 9/28/2013
Wow So good! XD can't wait for next chapter!
wolfrunnerable12 chapter 7 . 7/17/2013
Yeah a new update!
Jerena Xaturd chapter 7 . 6/8/2013
Just curious
I thought this was a fanfiction on Loke and Lucy not Lucy and Jellal
I don't understand how he plays into all this .
Guest chapter 7 . 6/4/2013
apenas vi esta historia y ya me muero por leer los siguientes capítulos me encanta este emparejamiento leoxlucyxjellal quisiera que hubiera mas historias a si
sunny chapter 7 . 6/3/2013
Aww, I like how you describe the kiss!
Lucyheartfilla chapter 7 . 5/30/2013
Finally omg omg update i have been waiting for this for a long time
Lucyheartfilla chapter 6 . 5/1/2013
Omg make it jellal and lucy instead of loke lucy ahh its so awesome i am very impressed hehehe love this fanfic
Guest chapter 6 . 4/13/2013
I love this , please keep updating ! You should include a ball for Lucy on her birthday! Hope that stirs up some ideas :) 10 out of 10
Guest chapter 6 . 4/13/2013
I love this I hope you update soon , you should include a ball for Lucy I her birthday , I think it would be nice 10 out of 5 :)
AloTakahashi chapter 6 . 4/13/2013
I love the story soo far , please Keep updating! you should include a ball for Lucy on her birthday. Hope that stirs up some ideas :) 10 out of 10
Missoldschool321 chapter 6 . 4/11/2013
i love the jelu moments but i keep remembering this is lolu fanfic but they're my fav couple
shnickers chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
Cute story! Definitely liked the choices in occupations for all of the characters - ha, Natsu as manager of a motor company was too PERFECT.

Triangle with Jellel is interesting... I'm kind of a diehard Jellel/Erza fan, but I'm open to new pairings! The setting is also interesting... it does remind me of the canon universe, where there are elements of tradition mixed in with modern things. Like how you mention Google and Jumanji and yet somehow it's culturally appropriate to marry your cousin?

One thing... I don't know if you do this consciously or if you're just very enthusiastic, but there are a TON of exclamation points.
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