This was such a good fic? It's so open-ended, which I usually dislike but it WORKS and I already know what I need to know to be satisfied
Anyway I really loved this, thanks for writing it!

I really would have liked to see how this fic goes. Is it safe to say this fic is abandoned

Very interesting, please continue this!

Beautiful shame it was abandoned

I don't have a review good enough for this story. All I can say is that it has taken possession of my heart, and won't give it back. So it's only fair that you update as soon as possible, so I can breathe again.

Mmm...Lily still treats him like a doormat, but Linda would fight for him against bullies. I think I can tell the difference.

Lily seems to be working very hard to keep her mad on, but I'm sure once she finds out about the Mark on his arm, that she'll drop him again. Linda seems like rather more of a friend, though with her going to college, she's got to be several years older.

But having Dobby help him, that's great.

Still, if it weren't for the classes that he needs, Severus is better off away from school.

Um, were the techniques he practiced from Legilimency, or Occlumency?

one of my fav stories!

wait, but this is so intriguing! i hope you can continue this in the future!

wow! simply beautiful! is it completed? I ask because of sounds like en ending, but you really can continue it. it was very enjoyable read. thank you

I've re-re-re-re read this story again, despite the fact it's probably abandoned. A pity... Such an original story, such a good writing.

This is an absolutely fantastic story. Please update!

Update

I give you the potential reader this advice. Do not read this. Not because it is anyway bad but because this fic is simply one of the best out there and it seems to be discontinued. For those who will ignore my advice I guess I little review is in order. The fic focuses mainly on Severus Snape POV with the occasional other character. It starts of with a time traveling mystery man (Harry) who appears in the most mysterious of ways leaving the end of the chapter with mystery. Enters Severus Snape who keeps finding himself running into the mysterious man on his school supply excursion. From there we read about Severus Snape and the unlikely friendship he is developing with his enigmatic Dada teacher that is bringing his entire world crashing down, whilst also learning about the physically and emotionally scarred man.

This is an incredible, remarkable, brilliant story! Your writing kept me hooked, and I am a little saddened that there are only 15 chapters completed. I really want to know what happens next!
I'm sure you must have been extremely busy to come back to it, but I do hope you do eventually!