Intresting

It's Merlin

i was more confused by ichigo son somehow defeat ywach power by "stabbing his own children hand into a hole?"

did you just post a chapter to rant, not cool. Given how dead this is at the very least include a status update.

love story cant wait for new chapters

Dont get me wrong I like the story but it feels more like a report then a story as there is very little talking between characters until this latest chapter. It just feels like you are explaining the story instead of telling it. Other then that I think its a brilliant story with a lot of potential. I look forward seeing what happens next.

And adding your own brand of it I mean seriously fem ichigo really i am out

good chapter and interesting as well

The story is good. Keep it up.

Cool

interesting and good chapter

LOL archer as a nanny. now that is an interesting sight xD

Interesting

Good ideas here. Just needs tweaking

Ok I'll be blunt, this story has alot of potential but quite frankly, it sucks. Reason I say this is because there is a massive lack of information. Yes your giving info but there isn't any details what so ever, things like that ultimatly drives me away from stories like this one. If it had more details, more information, then hell yeah I would love to read it but all you are doing is nothing but a fancy recap, and that rarely is something I'm sure not much people enjoy ready, unless it is in a sequel but this isn't a sequel and a lack of details is a quick way to make me stop reading a story. So my advice would be instead of skipping events and blast through everything talk about what is going on and not jump through a massive amount of time skips. Like I said, a lot of potential but a lack of info and the like is NOT an interesting story to read.