I find very annoying that bulma can't fathom how piccolo became one of the good guys when she's married to frickin vegeta the pulled this crap in the show too when talking about babdi's ability to control some through the darkness in their and krillin teases piccolo about getting controlled when the guy who commited genocide for a living is standing right next to them

you should update please

Wow this is getting good plz hurry with the next chapter PLZ it's amazing

Thanks for writing, and for writing a good story too.

I like that you've added your own minor villain.

I have to say, this story is very well written.

Thanks for writing.

Excellent, everything is great. Absolutely loving the growing friendship between Videl and Gohan. I'm only sad that there are but 2 chapters left.

I think the "wandering martial artist" introduction went over very well. I liked the whole "spirit of martial arts" discussion.

Also, I forgot to say, last chapter there were some paragraphs that incorrectly began with quotation marks.

This chapter came off very very good. I liked the new interactions because of the history project, and VidelErasa learning about Bulma.

Thanks for writing.

Even though I liked te anime, rewriting it is lackluster. Still good though

I think this chapter would have been a little better if the different time jumps were labelled, although you did have context clues which mostly helped. Te problem is that before I read the context clue, I couldn't tell the jump had happened.

Nicely done. You can see your progression as a writer with each chapter. Great work! :)

Hello again! I'm sorry I couldn't review the past chapter or this one sooner for the matter, work has kind of hell last couple of weeks.

Anyway, I'm so happy about both updates! While I'm worried about this Maloja guy (and the fact he's searching for someone with a pure heart, oh no...) it was really interesting to see that not everyone likes Mr. Satan. Don't take me wrong, I like Satan, I learnt to appreciate his character and enjoy his silliness, but it felt weird that everyone just loved and worshiped him as they were brainwashed or something. It's really nice to see that there are still humans that don't believe everything they see/hear, and that makes me think that there are people like that outside the Martial Arts Tournnament staff.

Curious as she is, I'm sure Videl is going to find a lot of things of those "lost tournnaments", and that's going to take her to Goku, Chichi and, of course, Gohan. I'm eager to see how's she going to react to that. Although it was very sad to find out she gets to spend holidays by her own :'( it's really great for character's development but really really sad.

I loved how this 11 chapter started. Gohan and Piccolo's relationship is a favorite of mine, Piccolo is not only a mentor but kind of a father and it's sweet that Gohan gets to talk with him when he's in doubt, even if he's hot that talktative.

May is kind of a hard month, isn't it? I'm really impressed the way you're handling all these dates, anniversaries and birthdays at the same time, it's so exciting!

Aaand finally: Gohan having nightmares about Goku's death is really...don't know if "good" but it's impressive. It feels real, I really like to imagine Gohan always felt guilty about that issue somehow, that's human, we act like that. I love it.

It's really cool that Gohan and Videl get to forget their problems by training together, despite the "romantical implications" that it may have, it's a thing they both enjoy doing, I believe it's a way to communicate and something that keeps them away from their problems for a while. I'm glad they get to spend those dates doing such thing, probably Erasa wasn't aiming for that but it worked anyway.

Man, I like this story so much! I'll be eagerly waiting another update, and I'll try to read and review as soon as I get the notification. Take care and thank you for a fantastic update!

Cool chapter! More soon please!

Nice chapter!

Nice chapter good job!