why does everyone have gryffindor slytherin hufflepuff ravenclaw fics

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Decent Fic but your writing doesn’t flow all that well I’m hopeful later fics fix this issue. Also disappointed you’ve kept Fleur from the harem but oh well.

I really enjoy your work and hope you are able to finish the stories, that you have written.

Thanks for your work.
Frank

Thanks for sharing this. I hope your new career is going well.

What the fuck you idiot. You made Harry a doormat! What the fuck were you thinking? You send him, Greengrass and granger back in time with their memories, and yet you immediately make him in trouble with the cunts. Even though they know that he is most likely as shocked as they are. Oh how I wish ‘authors’ like you never had a way to spew your shit in writing. Fuck this story

You HAVE GOT to stop writing “Harry gulped”. You don’t fucking gulp every damn time you swallow.

Well thats what you get for stealing Old Man Goat (Dumbledore) from Harry's vault and also ignoring his parent's will by placing him to the Dursleys in the first place. And more importantly along with the Weasleys. Not sure about Fred and George since they are loyal to Harry than the other weasleys besides Charlie. Sad Percy doesn't even know that the money he gotten from his school was all from Harry. Not to mention blocking his magic too.

It took me a while to find this story. I've been finding some of these kind of stories. But some where weren't updating as the usual.

This seems like it would be a good story, unfortunately there are quite a few issues that make it extremely frustrating to try and read. I made it about halfway through chapter 2 before I had to stop as it was simply too annoying to read anymore.

Example: "Harry wondered if the old coot had wiped her memory of the events then the biggest shock was revealed Snape greasy potion master, and someone who made Harry's life hell was one of his godfathers."

This isn't the first time I've read where James was a horndog. But it is the first time I've read Lily had a potty mouth. Not that I can blame her. I have to say I'm all in favor of Daphne and Hermione's stress relief for Harry. Too bad he forgot the silencing charm for his parents' portraits. Now, this isn't the first time I've read where Fumblemort made a Horcrux to cheat death. Though it is the first time I've read where he murdered his sister to make it and used her ring to house it. In another, the Elder wand was one but it belonged to Grindlewald and he had switched bodies with Fumblemort. So it was Grindlewald trying to kill Harry every year, not Fumblemort. But this is all Fumblemort. How he can call himself the Leader of the Light when he murdered his sister out of jealousy and made a Horcrux I'll never understand. I wonder if he'd still it was for the greater good if it was him who was used to make a Horcrux? Probably not as only he can do something like that and still be light. So it becomes quite obvious that Harry has to kill both Dark Lords in order to have a life.

AFF?

I've been saying for a while now the Fumblemort was the Primary Dark Lords of the late twentieth to early twenty-first centuries and this in this story proves it! Several people I've talked to about Fumblmorts' treatment of Harry insist that the old meddling fraud is just misunderstood. I misunderstood nothing! When it came to the treatment Harry Potter got from his so-called family and all those " adventures " he had while in school, OH YA, it was all a misunderstanding. How many dead students would it take before someone realized that Fumblemort had gone exceptionally Dark? How many single heir families would he have to kill before it was realized? I attended boarding school and something like what went on with Harry would've been told to every family as well as the police. One of my many questions has always been " why didn't Susan Bones tell her Aunt/Guardian/ Head of the DMLE about everything going on in the school? " I already know that telling Fudge would be like telling a cement wall to move. Neither one has any kind of sense. Unless of course there's plenty of gold involved that is. Then Fudge'll do whatever he's paid to do. With all this, my question still stands. Why should Harry be the one to clean up Fumblemorts' mess? Why shouldn't he let the British magical burn itself away? The moronic Pure-Bloods are already well on their way to breeding themselves into extinction. So, get all the Muggle-Borns', Half-Bloods and Muggle-Raised out of the school and country then let the morons breed themselves into extinction. Or just wait till they piss off the Queen and she removes them to six feet under.

Seems ol' Tommy-Boy is missing his inner circle. If he manages to regain a body, well, an adult body, he's gonna find he's missing a few of his psychos. Not to mention his immortality. And seeing as ol' Fumblemort's up next, he's gonna be truly shocked to learn just how many of the Pure-Blood Lords are not dead. I'm quite sure Death is exceptionally happy with all those missing soul pieces Harry's sent him so far. And'll be even happier when he sends the final one as well. Too bad Fumblemort won't be around to chastise Harry for destroying all those family heads.

Ya, the idea of Pansy's family feeding her loyalty potions isn't all that surprising to me. They are extremely loyal to Vulturesnot after all. Which actually means they like the rest of the Pure-Blood braindead fools couldn't bother to do their homework once they heard the shit coming out of Riddle's mouth. They claim to check family names to see if they are truly pure-bloods but when it came to Riddle all they did was listen to what he said and accepted that he was a Pure-Blood Lord. But never truly looked into his supposed family name. I ask you how hard would it've been to actually look for the family name of Voldemort? That they never did is exceptionally obvious!

Hopefully, this'll be the last of the Malfoy line as both father and son will die soon. With any luck, Lucius will be sent through the veil and Draco'll die in Azkaban. But if not, maybe Narcissa can clean out the Malfoy vaults in Gringotts long before Draco gets out. It's either that or allow the Ministry of Magic to take it. I'd personally rather Narcissa get it then the ministry. Those fools are too corrupt as it is to be allowed to get that kind of money! And though they'd deny it to the end, most supporting Riddle even if they don't realize it.