This was so good! I feel as though I never want it to end though there's not much you could continue with. It's just that feeling of loss when you finally finish a story that is settling in.

I love Gwaine of course with his outgoing flirtiness and all the other characters. It had the mystery and romance that kept me hooked. Just loved it. Also while reading I had a playlist on and 'Right in Front' by Ivory Layne came on mentioning amnesia and it seemed so perfect (though half the lyrics didn't quite match up). It was a neat coincidence I thought. :)

Not sure if you're still on here, but wanted you to know that I really loved this story. :) 6/13/14

It was certainly a twist on the genre and an enjoyable read. I thought to begin with that the missing cats was more ominous, that somehow Merlin's presence had brought the old horrors that he'd faced into the new time line. I thought it might have been the afanc, lol. So it was interesting when you brought in the idea of the 'ghost'. It was cute seeing the Princesses as sister, a lovely little touch.

Overall your story is quite good, but there are some parts that are a little rough and could do with smoothing out. For instance, in this chapter, there's one particular sentence where you say the word "room" three times. With a bit of reworking, you can avoid instances like that. I think I spotted another sentence where a word was repeated, though I can't remember what it was. There were also some typos and spelling errors and sometimes when I thought I line break between speakers would have helped, but by and large you've done a decent job with editing and structure.

When I read the scene with Morgana and the aborted phone call, I had some expectation that it was going to lead somewhere, so I was a bit puzzled when nothing really came of it. It's like that particular element of the story was forgotten, or if you'll forgive the analogy, was cut as a deleted scene. The way you handled her estrangement though, was good because it was plausible and I suppose it went some way to tying up that particular thread. It still feels like more exploration could have been done there.

I liked the idea of their group collecting people from the Camelot myth, it was an nice addition. Your characterisations were good, but the dialogue was occasionally confusing (as I mentioned before) when I wasn't sure if it was Gwen or Gwaine talking, especially when they're having that five way conversation and I wasn't sure who exactly was asking for all the explicit details.

You did well; neither too long or too short, the story had a good tempo and pacing, not lingering unnecessarily over scenes or trivial details. It was a light, undemanding reading and different enough to stand out amongst the flock. Good work.

I really liked this story. I love reincarnations and modern AU's where Merlin still has his magic. Also, this is a well written piece.

Good show, Love.

Absolutely loved this creative and original story. What a wonderful twist tale. Wasn't sure how you were going to pull it off with Merlin getting back to his own time and not breaking modern Arthur's heart, but you did it! (What about Morganna though?)

All the feels! So many feels! Happy and sad and lonely and loved all at once!

loved it.

This fis was completely awesome! I love it totally, I really liked the concept about time traveling and the fact that at the end Merlin could return to Arthur's side.

I have nothing else to say, just this fics was awesome and you have an incredible writing.

Sorry if there is any mistake in this review, my mother language is the Spanish so my english is very crappy when it's about writing xD.

See you!.

Atte.: Chibi Dhamar.

Awww this was magical! Lovely, unique fic and very well written :) I loved the ending as I was keeping my fingers crossed for Merlin to return to present day Arthur in some fashion!

AnyaMaia x

A lovely story, thank you :)

This is so incredible:') I'm crying and I think they're happy tears because it's so adorable and ahhhmygawd. Beautiful.

the ending was sweet:) I wasn't expecting for Merlin to top, that was . . . weird. but not bad weird. keep up the good work!

Wow, this was just the best fic ever. It should have a million more reviews.

That was truly amazing! I stayed up all night to finish reading it, I just couldn't stop! When I saw the direction the story was moving in, I could barely stand it, I thought it would be so sad; but you finished it so well. One of my favourite stories of all time, thank you so much for all the time and effort you put into this. )

Loved it Thanks for sharing :) xx