This is so good!

Dang, that was super-cute and well-written!

Beautiful. ;)

It really was.

Good job!

that was just frickin cute. I gotta say, Finn's sudden vocabulary being equal to that of a poet's was a little odd, but you pulled it off. I wish you would have dumbed it down a bit so it would seem more natural (like with the dialogue), but points for great vocab. Overall, nice story, original and beautiful